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continue please
Well, I suppose fics like these were inevitable. Too bad it wasn't done right.
*you're
I think y'all can see the typo.
Other than that, the story was okay.
2101901 Actually
''your'' means ''You are''
and
''You're'' means ''You're''
So it wasnt a typo and could be used anyway
YOU WILL LIKE THIS STORY
Free Pitchforks and Torches Get them while they are Still flamable!
2102262
Um, I don't think that's how it works.
"You're" is a contraction of "you are". So in this sentence, "you're" is correct, as in:
"I can't believe you are becoming a Princess!"
"Your" is possessive and therefore doesn't belong here. An example of a sentence where it would belong:
"I can't believe your friend is becoming a Princess!"
(Sorry, I don't mean to sound condescending. I just wanted to clear things up.)
The story was also quite good, but I feel like it was slightly rushed. Keep up the good work!
2102903 I think you will earn a Cutie mark in smartness
I'm just curious about this, but does anyone want me to continue this story further? Even though I have minor grammar mistakes, I'll be sure to fix them in the next.
Just a huge wall of text try to duplex pace th
I like it continue!!!!! Just please double space the paragraphs next time. There's a HUGE wall of text
P.s. maybe you can read my story, my day in Ponyville
2104175
i would love it, to see this fic being continued.
-Cheers!
-say in civilized british voice- i do believe that this story should certainly be continued
. i say, this story should also no longer be cancelled
. it is a highly-
and i look forward to new chapters
. amen and peace out
ah screw it. i think this story is good
I
this story. So please continue with this. I must know how it ends. 
