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2105181 I was thinking about adding them after your second comment, that one:
2104001 initially I just didn't want them in the list of characters, but I guess you are right. I'll add them for now.
2107550 That only seems so because it goes over into the next chapter without interruption. (You mean the end of chapter 2 right?)
2108041 I will try my best, but if I have to rewrite large portions there may be a small delay.
2108501 I almost died laughing
2108024 i45.tinypic.com/34fnn1f.jpg
...there's too much going on here.
I think I will keep on this story like I keep on blue angel (that's pretty damm close)
Time to sign officially
King Lazaro Sol of Ziolia
Yes you did, he has made some progress in the story, things seem to be working out fine. Although Gilda seems to be making her move on him now, this will cause problems with his crush at the moment.
2109940
Strange, I didn't get a notice from you when you made your reply to me, but thanks for finally adding them in the story it appears to make more sense to me now.
After those scenes with Nurse Redheart, Gilda, and Rarity, I have only this to say; I really, REALLY hope you aren't leading to the twist I think you're leading to. I hope that it is just one changeling that is either enamored with and/or feeding off of him, but if over half the town is made of changelings (which I am beginning to suspect) that would ruin so much of the story for me. I do want to see Anon somehow reconcile with the Mane 6 and if scenes where some of that is accomplished turn out to be fake I'll be very disappointed. It is your story though; you do what you want and I'll stick with it until the end.
Now with that out of the way, to my fellow readers; assuming that was the real Gilda that bit into him, any idea/theory on what that means? Is this something eagles or lions do?
~Staples
If changelings hadn't been introduced I would have said this guy was losing his mind.
2109940 You magnificent bastard, that couldn't have been said any better. I can't wait!
We must rename this magnificent story to 'Apple Family Food Orgies'. immediately!
Okay here's what you don't do. If you don't follow the changeling path, and instead head towards the
'hallucination' type plot I advise you to stop. I say that Anon is merely in a earth hospital while
employees and others are reminding him to take his pills which he continually neglects and forgets.
Thus, leaves him believing he is in a pony land. If This (<----- those words) are true then the whole
emotional, thrill and relatability of this story crumbles. Don't do that.
You can't tell him what to do!
I'm not, I'm just advising him to stay away from a cliche and a heartbreak to many readers.
You're still being forceful.
Like I give a buck, I have no reputation here to ruin.
Shut up! The both of you!
... A good story, but it's a mess with very little structure. Not Thumbs Up, but certantly not Thumbs Down.
2110229
Afaik both, actually, but for different reasons. In this case I'd say it's part of her avian heritage: Biting is among the behaviours birds use to work out dominance between mates, and usually gets worse during breeding season; as is trying to herd your mate into a secluded and safe spot. Note how the exchange went:
1: Gilda showing off her flight skills and throwing a pose (incidentally, at least partly bald eagle courtship behaviour)
2: Her herding Anon into a secluded and "safe" spot (perhaps only to do this in secret - still noteworthy)
3: Showing Anon she's stronger than he is
4: Giving him a bite hard enough to draw blood, but not a truly serious injury
5: Seeing that he's too cowed to meet her eyes afterwards, and "laughing joyfully"
All signs point to Gilda just having shown her dominance over - and too - her prospective mate.
2111715 This man for president! He has common sense!
Someone needs to make a picture of anon standing on a cliff with as a superhero with sdm on his chest.
It's chrysalis !!!!!! I just know it!!!! She's the one who has her eyes on anon this entire time!!
I knew it! I knew it! it seems Gilda is somewhat interested in Anon........umm....i think...
yer... YER. YER!!!
Yer= your. please stop using it for you.
for instance do you mean "Yer need t'listen" OR "Ye need t'listen"
or you could use "ya" or just you. We would still get it. Yer makes it sound like she has a weird speech impediment.
So the raping finally begins........