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2104534 You want help fixing it up?
2104652 Thanks, but sadly I have to decline.
I'm using the reformatting as an opportunity for a last proofreading and to edit the story some more, some parts still don't add up completely, others are not usable outside of a greentext or I just want to add some details here and there.
But I really appreaciate the offer, much appreciated.
2104882 Alrighty.
Story is still going on pretty strongly, I just didn't know it was a greentext story which actually makes a lot of sense to me now why the format the way it is. I'd like to once again suggest you add the mane cast to the character roster since they are just as important as the Diamond Dogs and Chrysalis at the moment but I wonder if this is going to shift to these characters later in the story because they do become important later.
Wow this is good. I mean adjectives fail me, just the right mix of akward, comedy, serious shit and lead up to shipping. Great story.
Damn I feel bad for Pinkie. Really hope Anon's plan works.
not the best, but it's o.k.
also, chapters are ending kind of abruptly.
Make Pinkie Pie fall in love with him? I can think of about 50 different reasons why that is a bad idea but it would at least be interesting to see him crash and burn if that is the case.
Also, I honestly wasn't expecting to see Nurse Redheart again so I guess that flirting at the beginning does have a point. That is good.
~Staples
Seeing as though you have uploaded one chapter everyday for the last three days I suppose
I will find myself refreshing this page for the remainder of the afternoon.
On a separate note... The rustling of the jimmies is strong in this one.
2108041 That reminds me, what exactly are "Jimmies?" Anyone know?
2108316 The Rustling of Jimmies is a term used when an individual is is aggravated or caused similar displeasure.
drawception.com/pub/panels/2012/4-21/mrSGaAA97b-2.png this is why pinkie is soooo damn mad at him...
so he's going to flirt and or seduce pinkie? hmmm....well ok i guess.
Was... was that a Chrono Cross reference?