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aaawww dats cute
Hopefully after this, Anon will have some muscle from working in the mines and wont be such a little bitch if/when he gets out. Seriously, its getting hard to read this with anon being completely useless in every single way beyond being a sex slave to everypony and griffon.
I want to see the bad ass anon from before the first chapter.
Dammit i bet Lyndwin is trying to be a she boy.
Kiln better not die otherwise i would cry
Kiln... Best dragoness ever!
This story really reminds me of Piano Man.
After reading this story I now know why you should tell your friends you're in trouble somewhere else or even tell Rainbow Dash about Spitfire wanting to meet you. I also now know a tiny glimpse of what true slavery is like.
Anonymous is Kiln's protector, almost like a father figure. As such, I feel that it would be terribly inappropriate for Anon and Kiln to end up doing the sex.
But you know... There is this nice little drake in Ponyville that I think would be just perfect for her.
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This story doesn't have a good record when it comes to "appropriate"...
Hmmm tracking location... Sending mining ship... Blasting giant ass hole in location... Hoping that location was close to anon. Whelp that's it for now, see ya
I hate to say it, but this story is really starting to get quite dull. It started off really interesting and different with the human being weak and at the mercy of those around him, a welcome brake from the stereotypical superhuman ass-kicking machine. But as good as the story started, it doesn't seem to have gone anywhere or done anything since.
This story really needs a good dose of plot progression in the next few chapters or I think its going to start jettisoning readers, and that would be a real shame.
ARGH get the gas masked anon back at least what a puss puss of a main character this is geting quite dull what happend to that hand to hand combat when he was bad fffffukk i sugest raeding your comments before continuing
I agree with other eviews saying that this story is becomeing bland. You started with an interesting idea. Sadly it quikley devolved into the character erither getting beaten, or raped. What is the point?
I also still don't see why he romance tag is being used. It is not in the story beyond the characer having one with Pinkie being mentioned. It is hardly played on.
Oh Mah Gahd I fricken luv dragons they are best mythical creature I would do anything to meat a dragon in real life! ANYTHING!!! and not a Komodo Dragon, but a much more realistic dragon, like one that doesn't fire anything from it's mouth but still looks boss. Those dragons are my favorite! And also, Kiln is an amazing name!