one word of advice? Needs spaces... it is a bit cluttered.

That is definitely a sad way to start a series for this poor man. However the beginning really reminds me of Dust and how he used to fight against normal people before the game starts.

Fucking G-Man, I really do hope they explain what he is when/if Half Life 3 ever comes out.

so if this guy is such a "badass" why was he his shit tossed around so easily? shouldn't his body react defensively with muscle memory?( if he even had any training).

I thought those carbine soldiers where aliens. And only a few in the ranks were human, and where is Gordon Freeman and his gravity gun when you need him!?

Ummmm...what?

Also, why didn't he just jab his finger in Gilda's eye, then grab her throat and crush it? Humans are strong enough to do that. The throat on any animal is very soft and the trachea is easily crushed with the gripping strength of a human hand. He could use his other hand to pinch her "thumb" knuckle closest to her "palm". That would release most of the pressure of her grip and he would have fallen out of her grasp. Then he could just back away and watch her suffocate or something.

Still, at least it isn't bad. Just kinda convoluted.

DAFUQ?!

WHY ALL I HERE IS EPIC CUCKING MISIC WHEN HE STANDS UP WND WALKS AWAY