Graduated and ready to get off to college, Night Glow, Slendermane, and their friend, Notebook are headed for the prestigious Lunar Art Academy. Can they handle their new teachers and new friends? Will Night and Notebook be able the keep their sanity in tact sharing a house with an eccentric pegasus, an overly attached dragon assistant, and a bi-polar gryphon? Will Slendermane be able to maintain a relationship with Night Glow. And just who does this Fluer De Lis think she is?
Welcome to college young ponies.
Chapters (2)
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Okay, you have my attention.
1939656 I have bad news for you my friend. This is an alt universe where Slendy does not fuck shit up. However, in my story "The Mark" the plot will be getting pretty "Cupcakes" rated. This story I made so that I can lightly ship my OC and a random pony I'm obsessed with. Also both of my bff's have their OC's in this too. Though the one is not introduced yet.
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Oh, alright.
Will still read just because of title involving Luna or Lunar
1940033 Of course! Head Master Luna is best princess!
My Thoughts:
Well, this story certainly has flaws.
I find the concept of Celestia gaining an OC as her new apprentice interesting.
Others would find that a bit disturbing, just a little warning.
You have a bit of gaps in the plot. An example from the story would be about how Applebloom is a clothing designer.
Unless you've explained that in a prequel story, that's one issue you should fix.
Grammar problems aside, the story is fluid at the least.
Still, I'm kinda looking forward to some more chapters.
1940786 Perhaps I need to make this more clear. Slender is LUNA's apprentice. Also, in the show it was been shown that Apple Bloom has an eye for design/fashion.the beginning of One Bad Apple shows this. As does the talent show episode. I didn't plan on giving it any more background as the CMC are only here for the 1st 2 chapters. After that they are in a College different than my main cast. Slendy, Night Glow, Notebook, Luna, Digit, a currently unnamed dragon, and an unnamed gryphon.