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Snowfall

A mare unknowingly murders many ponies and contemplates on how she could live with herself.

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Flash Conception

Flash Conception #1 · Jan 7th, 2013 · 1 · · The Snow Has Fallen ·

Looks good. You kind of jump into the story without set up, but its good.

Sorren

Sorren #2 · Jan 7th, 2013 · · · The Snow Has Fallen ·

This story is a general mess of grammar and a mosh pit of mistakes. Your writing style is fair from what I can tell, you just need help with execution and a good editor.

Comment posted by Namehobo deleted Apr 27th, 2013

TheGreatWubbingWubsy

TheGreatWubbingWubsy #4 · Jan 7th, 2013 · · · Realisation ·

Its not a Wub-Fic but it will do

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