Lightning Bolt was a more than average pegasus. He was a famous dare devil, known throughout Equestria. He was on top of the world, until one day, he was involved in an accident during a show at Canterlot. Afterwards he loses hope for life and falls into a deep depression. Then one day he meets Rainbow Dash, and things then take an unexpected turn as the two learn there's more to life than flying.
Well... Fluttershys confession was unexpected. Otherwise a decent story.
And just a tip: it is spelled Twilight.
needed the money...
1826075 In my mind, when someone's an extra in a porn movie, they don't have sexual relations, but i kinda left it open to interpretation. However you wanted it to be would be as right as anything else. Also, have i been spelling it wrong this whole time? wow, now i feel dumb
the chapters are alittle fast pace and short but i love the story idea
1826110 it's okay to make spelling errors, we are only human. Keep up the good work.
Like where this is going. Keep it coming.
what pinobutter said
FIRST
FIRST
Very good mostly error free and getting interesting
FIRST again
this is amazing! Keep it coming *BROHOOF*
1844808 *Brohoof*
Liking the story so far, I Like the somewhat fast pace it's not too fast you can't keep up. Keep up the good work
My subjects are learning fast! Good job Rainbow Dash .
damn rainbow dash, DAFFUQ!? we need a trollo dash icon.
I can not believe what i am about to say... Damn you Pinkie you party pooper! Did i just accuse the party pony for ruining a party?
1899108 because she did!
also. I really really want more of this story.
I think considering all of the story and such, ti would be practically impossible to make it a "senseless" clopfic. anyway, can't wait for more. also. NONE OF YALL CAN SAY "FIRST!" because your wrong. and those are stupid!
I like the story. It's great up to the sex part, but hey, I'm just one guy, and I have never really liked things like that, anyways. Can't wait to see more!
1939784 Really? What is it with people and saying they were first?
1976470 Wahey, you are not going to like my next fanfiction then. It's in production right now. MWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!
1978255 Hey, I never said I didn't like the story. As a matter of fact, I really loved the story. I'm...... just not in to the whole 'clopfic' thing.
1980348 Real talk, thank you so much for enjoying the story. It really does mean a lot to me.
1981215 You bet. Can't wait to see more!
“Damn T. Rainbow Dash is hot!”
freaking hilarious
Oh hell nah speedster dont you even dare.
2248096 Ssshh it's supposed to be a twist!
I read this with the interactive Rainbow Dash acticated, she said "Yes, it's all true".
I LOL'd
Speedster....
You wouldn't...
He couldn't...
Well, actually, he didn't know.
HOLY MOTHAFU- I can read this without punching things. Why would you do this to Lightining, we love him too much plz dont
Eye twitching urge to kill speedster rising possible ways to kill.
Step one. Break wings
Step two. Rip off wings
Step three. Break legs
Step four. Rip out tounge
Step five. Bludgen skull close to death
Step six. Hook up I.v.
Step seven. Cut open body with knife
Step eight. Remove organs
Step nine. cut of legs- of still alive proceed to step ten
Step ten. Set speedster on fire.
2285318 what the...it's...it's just a story...calm down
2248124
I still want him dead.
2285395 nice
I'm pretty sure she did just use him. 2 and a half weeks and she never told Speedster about Lightning Bolt? And she kissed Speedster back and made out with him? I don't see this story ending well for Lightning at this point.
2285318 Step eleven: SAXTON HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALE!
Nice chapter, Comrade. I hope thing work out between Lightning and Rainbow. They seem great for eachother. Hope to see the next one soon!
2285318 Dude...
You aren't doing it right...
Give him the Columbian Necktie instead of cutting his tongue out.
2288977
While he watches two girls one cup
2289086 I'm guessing you don't know what the Columbian Necktie is....
2289096
Not a clue?
2289274 Alright, where to start...
Basically, a Columbian Necktie is where you grab someone's throat, rip it out, along with the tongue, and it hangs down like a tie. The tongue is longer than you think. As a matter of fact, if it wasn't for that small tendon connecting your tongue to the bottom of your mouth, you would actually end up swallowing it and choking on it.
But, yeah, that's a Columbian Necktie.
2289302
Then I prefer that over the thing I put.
2289391
What the hell? Why are people discussing the finer points of torture Well to each his own I suppose
2285318 dont forget to rip his eyes out with a salad fork
2301971>>2285395>>2289302 okay, did I just not write Speedster very well or are you all seriously that attached to Lightning? Cause damn...
2301996
Hay lightning kicks ass speedster is meh!
2301996 Yeah, Lightning is awesome!
Speedster is just just a Woman stealer
he can go jump off a very VERY VERY VERY VERY tall cliff
Good chapter!