Well Luna heard what he thought.

hey man i love your storey. mebbeh ah could help wit da story you writing?
yeah maybe i could check it over for errors and be your spellchecker guy. offer's up if ya want it.

I understand where you are coming from when you say that. But when I say there illunions all I mean is that there not real Ponys yet they can still fight protect and think for themeseleves. I have taken into consideration that might have been confusing but I won't change it, sorry. I'm happy you share this with me and I hope you have a nice day.