The CMCs are at it again. In an attempt to gain their cutie marks, our three protagonists discover an ancient tome in Twilight's library and use a spell promising to deliver them an "adventure beyond imagination." However, things do not go as planned, and the three young fillies find themselves awakening in a world far different from the beautiful land of Equestria. Now transformed and confused, the ponies must find each other and, hopefully, a way to return home. Yet when an evil arises that threatens not only this new world, but also their own home, will the CMC be able to protect those they care for most?
Cutie Mark Dimensional Crusaders, move out!
Chapters (4)
Soarin? Neat. I like where this is going.
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interesting i'm fallowing
Looks like this could go somewhere. Following, and I give you five Twists!
HAHA
soarin at the end of this
Nice introduction, good plot. Me gusta, I hope to see more.
It is sad that this fiction has not been updated in a long while. This story is amazing, and I hope that the author will someday come back and at least finish what he started.
Nice updated chapter! Can't wait for the next one, and I am so glad that this story updated!!
YAY!
Scootaloo, I hope that you don't get genetically changed up too much so that your friends can recognize you.
Also, I hope that Applebloom gets a hold of herself and starts to meet someone friendly soon.
If you don't mind, though, I do have a few questions I want to ask. If you can't answer any without spoiling the story, or if the questions will be answered in the next chapter, I understand.
-Why did that jerk of a doctor not let Scootaloo talk before he started to experiment on her genes? Is this other world really that bleak that they have to genetically alter survivors they find?
-For that matter, can no other person found in those wastes actually speak? Or is that only because of what Soarin and his other team mates constantly use to knock out the survivors they find?
-Also, I have to ask, how does that suit from Chapter 1 work? It seemed as though that the suit was doing all of the work while Soarin was there for most of the ride. Hence forth why he only saw Scootaloo was a GIRL when the helmet visor was off.
Sorry about that, this is still a well written story, and I hope that I can see more Chapters soon!
~Musleblast the Ultimate Gamer
Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for?
And how bad does it get ?
7917861 The dark tag is due to the fact that our heroines have found themselves trapped in a world slightly darker than than the one from which they have come. Just as with Facing Fear, this is a story that will include more mature themes than those found in the show, but will strive to avoid anything gratuitous.
"Let the experiments begin."/"Let's enjoy ourselves, yes?"
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Oh ho! Apple Bloom is an Ecomancer! Fitting!
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So.... Sort of like The Doctor from Cave Story merged with Vladimir Makarov from Call of Duty: Modern Warfare (several of them)?
Ah, Nyx! Greek goddess of the night. Nice alias.
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Shhh don't tell the doctor who it is. It's a secret
7920525 It's so secret, I don't even know!
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You don't? Damn, I was hoping at least one of us did.
Update?
Its so weird, even funny - when I find a stories that i like, its always to be unfinished. Well, anyway, i will be waiting for the continuation, and maybe someday...