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Danny is a normal human being, works everyday and doesn't really have much luck. Being a lucid dreamer he embarks on a journey he has never been on before. One day he finds himself in a different world, he's injured and is taken to hospital where things start to make less sense - upon waking he discovers everything is far more ideal for him after the initial shock of what he's now become. He believes it's all a dream, but is there something more?

Join Danny as he discovers himself in a different world with plenty of questions why this has happened.

(Written in the first person perspective/journal style - you may find it a little different than you're used to)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 13 )

HiE romance?
grammatical errors in summary?
chapters less than 1000 words?

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make your chapters longer and learn to write dialogue where people can actually figure out who's speaking, and then maybe we'll talk

"Hmmmm... That's Time Turner and... Derpy!" I shout."

Ahhhhhhh...
It's Doctor Whooves.

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That's correct my friend, It will become clear soon why my OC calls him Time Turner. Keep an eye out for the next chapter!

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*Stares At screen for Five hours*

Nope, Nothing.
Time to DO Something Tonight.

* Not wink. Not wink. Not hint. Not hint.*

1736533

Be patient my friend, the next chapter is a long one. Maybe ready today or tomorrow.

1736533

There we go, the next chapter.

*Looks at the thumbs up* :yay:
*Looks at the thumbs down* :fluttercry:

I'd make a mean joke about author being the only one to comment, but that would be mean. And not true, since I'd have to comment to pot it in the first place... •–––––•

aaaaanywho, i like this story! It's not my favourite of all time, but it's still really good.

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Thanks, glad someone likes it.

1762860 you're welcome :p


At first it was confusing, no scratch that.
It is quite confusing? is he human? Is he pony? Modern human or medieval human? I for one aint really sure 'bout it but whatever :D

th' story's still good

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I could answer those questions but it would spoil it when I get the new chapters done (you may have gotten a clue from chapter six. :pinkiegasp:) - next one is currently "in writing". Stay tuned!

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