Follow the adventures of the ones who will take part in changing the face of Equestria and lead it into a new era. This tale is long and not ending anytime soon. The select individuals watch Equestria change dramatically around them as they still manage to live their own lives to only a minimal degree of normality. Drama and adventure await...
I would appreciate some feedback so comments would be fantastic. Also I would like some suggestions as to who I should label as main characters, so far I got OC, Twilight, and Dash... I don't know if some others would be seen as main characters.
Chapters (36)
Holy...
Did he just pull a Doc Brown?
I want to read more of this!^_^
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Yes he did.
Me and my brother put a lot of time into these new fan fictions, trying to make them the best we could possibly do.
This was really well done, reading more.
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I'm glad you enjoyed them. I do realize some are better then others and I have been editing the ones I find are lacking some things.
Twilight I am disappoint.
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I considered posting the chapter with the M rated scene in it, I decided not to.
After reading chapter 1: I... what is this I dont even... Why is there a human tag?
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To make a long explanation short... Shit happens... a lot of it.
Wait. We go from crazy murder monster town to suddenly in the future with RD dead and War Heart missing. Wtf did I just miss?
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ZeroStar's Brother, The Writer:
Things will be explained, give it time.
Plus I'll soon repost all these chapters onto a new profile of my own so I don't have to use ZeroStar's
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ZeroStar's brother again, sorry for the mix up. I accidentally posted the wrong chapter. I couldn't change it back because Zero was out and I couldn't get the password from him til now. I'm posting what I have right now. Chapter 34 is now what it is supposed to be.
Dude, slow the fuck down. I could not even get past the first few paragraphs. The small portion I read was all jumbled together and I downvoted it almost immediately. It was completely unreadable. There was no rhyme or reason for what happened, it just did. There were no descriptions of places, no thought process, the whole thing just made no sense. If you went back and put some actual effort into it, it might be a good story; as of right now? No way.