• Member Since 26th Feb, 2012
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anonymouspony5X


I'm a brony. What more can i say?

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In a world of taxes, school, and reality television, it seems there is only one place honest, good people can escape to these days: into the magical land of Equestria. Like all bronys, Adrian and his friends Emma, Greg, and Zoe wish that they could place themselves into Equestria for longer then 30 minutes.

Which they do.

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Comments ( 12 )

Hail, user. Conjure me up a nice warm bed, would you?

TWE's Scribblestick here to identify the source of the downvote swarm! :pinkiehappy:

>reads story

That was... surprisingly well-written. The concept is nothing new, but I like what you've done with it. My guess is the downvotes stem from this:

Somehow, with no explanation, four friends find themselves in Equestria. Shenanigans quickly ensue.

This description practically screams "lazily-written, generically bad HiE fic." Which this isn't, but it's what I was expecting after that summary. Honestly, I'm not sure how you can make an HiE fic appealing at this point, so maybe there's just nothing to be done.

That's really everything I have. Best of luck! :twilightsmile:

~Scribblestick, TWE's notoriously friendly moderator

1672642 Uh-huh. You just keep on acting like you didn't mess up.:trixieshiftleft:

1672651 I'm not. That's my reaction to my own spelling error. Surprise, shock, sadness, despair, anger, more sadness, and shame. And also, derp.

1672686 Ah. I thought so, but I wasn't sure.:scootangel:

1672704 No worries. Communicating through emoticons has its obvoius drawbacks. :twilightsmile:

CHOO CHOO MOTHER FUCKER!!!:flutterrage:

Hopefully this wont be a standard HiE story.

Bit rushed really...

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