When Lighting Knight, or Light to his friends meets a Changeling in his new home, he has a few choic
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Yes, another changling story
You just made my day
The typo on the title will make people assume this is a sub par story, like judging a book for it's cover. Correct it.
Fun fact, changelings originated from an old legend about spirits that would take children then change into the child and pretend to be them
Keep up the story, it's got my attention
1663640 yeha i found that out when i had to do a histor report on them
1663665 I just googled changeling, but I do love changeling fanfics, seriously, this is good
1663679 Thanks, i'm glad so far, even though it was a short start lol
1663553fixed thanks
1663523Thank you, i've noticed what you mean and have changed it, thank you.
1663488well then im glad
This is a good beginning so far, but I feel like the wording of how things occur is just... off.
Don't misjudge my opinion though, I really like the idea you came up with, I just feel some descriptions could've been written better.
Please accept my up rate.
This has great potential, and is well-written for the most part--I think all you need to do is give this (and future chapters) a few more runs over with self-correcting to catch all the little things like typos and missing/misplaced words.
Awesome start, man! Looking forward to reading more of this!
a changeling fic?!
insta fav!
I look forward to more.
Unusual good start, but I think you need to improve the word selection for your narration.
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I felt the same way.
1664032Yes i see what you mean after rereading it, thank you.
I like the idea, but the execution is lackluster. Your story is riddled with incorrect words. Your word choice is a little wierd at times as well. I've tracked it for now and if you can polish it up I'll certainly look forward to the next few chapters .
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This...I like. Dis gon be gud.
THE GRAMMAR IT BURNS!!!!
ya noticed a lot of errors... a LOT
good thing I don't care too much about things like that so long as i know what was meant
I've only read two paragraphs, and I can already tell this story will drive me insane with bad grammar. It doesn't matter how good your story idea is if you can't write good English.
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I agree. The idea of the story is good, but I cringe every time I see bad grammar.
All right, I must let you know, that in the title of the chapter, the first letters of each word should be capitalized, except for words like: the, and, of, in, it etc.
So far I am liking it.
Also, the very first chapter (The Start of a Story) gives away a bit too much just to let you know.
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Do you know what that anime is?
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I know the feel, bro.
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Dur Ra-Ra-Ra. I think. I may have missed a 'Ra'
"think"
"an"
There is potential, but I am not sure if it is enough to keep me interested.
yes this is a changeling story but it looks to be from a different pov. I like it.
So many issues with this paragraph...
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Me: Continues reading anyways.
Egads, you really need a proofreader, so many typos and broken sentences.
Cheesy