When Lighting Knight, or Light to his friends meets a Changeling in his new home, he has a few choic
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I really feel as if I was just thrown into the circumstances of the story, as well.
You mention how Lightning meets this Changeling, but where is the bonding that occurs between them?
Or will that all become clear later in the story?
Sweet! More please!
Nice.
I love the update and have been waiting for it.
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this is all my feels
1670363 funny
well ship we got some awsome shit happening right here
Just letting you know
I'm sorry, but i do this with stories that have quite a few mistakes. I will edit it for you, making sure that the grammar and spelling is correct. I will not change any of the story, just the wording order to make sense. I will send you a PM labled: Changling Heart: Chapter 1.
Again, I am sorry, but it is a habbit of mine, that and I am really bored waiting for my next editing job.
I'd have to agree with Bookworm. I've had to struggle to finish the chapter. While i want to know more about the story, the lack of editing is nothing short of awful. If it doesnt get better in the next chapter or two, I'll have to drop this and move on. In the meantime, find a new editor.
You have a volunteer...(...Slowly raises hand...)