It has been four long years since the mane 6 have gone their separate ways. Upon being summoned for an audience with Princess Celestia, Spitfire is called upon to gather the Bearer's of the Elements of Harmony to battle a coming evil and rescue Princess Luna from a grim fate. But will the very things that tore them apart keep them from heading the call once more?
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this could get interesting when they go to get fluttershy...
There are a lot of good ideas here. I would say that the pacing in this chapter could use a lot of work.
Okay fixed some grammar in the third chapter rearranged somethings and made it a bit more smooth in what i like to believe is the stories flow. Also if your going to dislike my story I'd like you to tell me why your disliking it I take critisim well you know
Alright at the spot where Fluttershy
was saying the other plant name it got me confused because you didnt clear it up saying about whether or not if it was the one to heal or the one used to hurt Rainbow 
. Also you need to have more AJ in this story. She's not here yet!! 
lol but over all a good chapter. I still want to read the rest of the original story but oh well
Alright that was my bad on reposting the chapter. That'll teach me to try posting stuff running on no sleep for 48 hours. sorry for the false excitement
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take yo time man this is good
I must ask the gun scythe idea rings a bell have you watched red vs. blue animation of the same moves.
2045464 good to know you've seen it too
But no I had planned on Steam using a gun scythe for about a year and a half now. Overdrive however is a little alliteration to RWBY though, of which I am a fan 
snowfall......scythe........450 years--- THIS IS GOING TO END WELL
Hmmmmm......... I feel like Echo is in for some headaches
I love the comments at the beginning and end of each chapter. especially the one at the beginning of this chapter.
