/fangasm/ SQUEEEEE........... /fangasm/ now to read? watch for updates on this post within thirty or so minutes.
hmm... interesting do twi is literally near death because of a void botched teleport from the princess. I'm going to love seeing how this goes hopefully the next update isn't too far off.
I recall talking to you back when you had just started this story, glad to see the continued progress, as well as things now coming to a head. Death, or near death, is one way to show Celestia about Terminus. Looking forward to the next chapter, in which I'm guessing a LOT of things are going to happen.
A tinkling sound, followed by a splash, as something arced in her direction.
what exactly happened here and in the following scene? a grenade or alike gets thrown over to her, celestia tries (and fails) to teleport twilight out of danger in time?
2128013 Yes, it was a grenade, likely a fuel-air based IED of some kind manufactured by a pegasus with too much time on his hands. Twilight didn't see it though, just heard it fly past her in the dim lighting, so I didn't really want to come out and say it.
2128084 Heh, I actually didn't think about summoning a bullwhip... it was intended to be a throwaway joke. Good catch though.
2128125 well, i did get that it was some kind of small explosive device, the only thing that had me confused was the amount of different descriptions in that one paragraph, i wasn't entirely sure if the damage occurred as a result of what was thrown or from some kind of magical accident when celestia's magic interacted with twilight. looking at it in hindsight, its a lot clearer what was happening.
Hmmm, i expected some more conversing with Terminus with Celestias and Twilight Playtime. None the less, i look forward to the other part of this chapter.
2129058 There's a good reason Terminus' almost complete communications blackout in the presence of Celestia... read the part where they're walking to the hall again, and things will likely become a bit clearer, I think.
2128510 Oh, ok. Sorry I didn't pick up on that, I thought you were asking about the grenade
Hmm... So here you say the medipony team arrives, but in the next chapter the medipony team arrives after Terminus has healed Twilight. Also the honeysuckle scent was mentioned again, but seemingly in connection to flowers this time.
Continue.
/fangasm/ SQUEEEEE........... /fangasm/ now to read?
watch for updates on this post within thirty or so minutes.
hmm... interesting do twi is literally near death because of a void botched teleport from the princess. I'm going to love seeing how this goes hopefully the next update isn't too far off.
If I keep staring at the words, the cliffhanger will end.
You sir are evil. That cliffhanger is evil. This story is evilly good.
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Heh, I feel pretty bad about that. I kept writing after that point, but it turned out to be the logical breaking point between chapters.
When ISN'T the dirt unusually comfortable?
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I completely agree. It does not prevent me from glaring over the internet, though. Excellent chapter.
GOD sooooo good I need more of this please.
Please continue. This is too good to stop. Here comes Super Twilight. And I think she's mad..
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I had the same reaction, except it continued throughout the reading.
~Dess
I recall talking to you back when you had just started this story, glad to see the continued progress, as well as things now coming to a head. Death, or near death, is one way to show Celestia about Terminus. Looking forward to the next chapter, in which I'm guessing a LOT of things are going to happen.
Evil. That right there is pure, unbridled Evil.
Evil I say!
2127039 Well hopefully Celestia's relationship with Twilight won't be damaged too bad with Terminus's reveal.
Well that is cool, never expected my art to be used as cover art for a fiction.
Pixel Gen is just my Fim Ficiton name.
Argh! Damn cliffhangers! Also, great chapter!
Really liking this story so keep up the good work :)
Ahaha you weren't kidding about having a big cliffhanger this chapter.
great chapter. that cliffhanger was evil
what exactly happened here and in the following scene?
a grenade or alike gets thrown over to her, celestia tries (and fails) to teleport twilight out of danger in time?
2128013
Yes, it was a grenade, likely a fuel-air based IED of some kind manufactured by a pegasus with too much time on his hands. Twilight didn't see it though, just heard it fly past her in the dim lighting, so I didn't really want to come out and say it.
2128084
Heh, I actually didn't think about summoning a bullwhip... it was intended to be a throwaway joke. Good catch though.
Damn cliffhangers...please be quick with the next update. Good chapter though.
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well, i did get that it was some kind of small explosive device, the only thing that had me confused was the amount of different descriptions in that one paragraph, i wasn't entirely sure if the damage occurred as a result of what was thrown or from some kind of magical accident when celestia's magic interacted with twilight. looking at it in hindsight, its a lot clearer what was happening.
Hmmm, i expected some more conversing with Terminus with Celestias and Twilight Playtime. None the less, i look forward to the other part of this chapter.
2129058
There's a good reason Terminus' almost complete communications blackout in the presence of Celestia... read the part where they're walking to the hall again, and things will likely become a bit clearer, I think.
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Oh, ok. Sorry I didn't pick up on that, I thought you were asking about the grenade
I request the next chapter to be released soon!
Living with cliffhangers that huge is dangerous for my health
Oh cliffhanger, why must you tease us so?
Can't wait for the next chap....... so i'll just reread from the beginning again.
Assuming direct control.
Insert cliffhanger angst, praise and MOAR.
Hmm... So here you say the medipony team arrives, but in the next chapter the medipony team arrives after Terminus has healed Twilight.
Also the honeysuckle scent was mentioned again, but seemingly in connection to flowers this time.
I might be way off and probably am but is Terminus death or something like death?