Small edit: added the long overdue OC tag for Terminus. I was kinda shirty about that before, because people will just come here and assume it's some sort of harem self-insert OC bullshit without reading a damn thing, but I think enough people have read it now for it to be reasonably safe from that brand of stupid.
3248803 I need more of this. Any expectations as to when we might expect the next chapter?
In the silent tea room, Celestia’s crown hit the edge of the bench with a clink as she cast it aside. Her lips still felt gloriously numb, and she absently licked them, trying to recapture the sensation of Twilight’s icy mouth over hers. She let out a breath she had been holding, and just lay there, spread-eagled on the bench, dead to the world.
3249754 Actually, I'd say it just understands the complexity of patterns that arise from simple systems, more than it... caring, for lack of a better word. It's a difference in philosophy, due to the way that Terminus' race worked their magic over geological timescales, sleeping away the ages and making small edits, whereas Luna and Celestia are more of the 'just poof it into existence' sort.
3250642 Provided I don't get cockblocked by Luna again, I should have it out within the next two weeks. I'd already written part of chapter 11, although I'm not sure how much of that will make the final cut. If it does, it'll probably be a long chapter, because for whatever reason I assumed I'd end chapter 10 with Twilight sleeping. Of course, things never go to plan. That kiss scene was entirely spontaneous after watching too much Adventure Time while drinking coffee. Honestly, I was worried the dream sequence was too stupid for the story, but so long as you guys seem to like it...
Twilight came so very very close to having her dirty dirty way with Celestia. .. With Celestia's full consent
on another note for some stupid reason I still worry about Terminus's actual goals and the goals of her master. Terminus feels trustworthy but we do not know if she is just trustworthy until X Y or Z happens. When the safety of equestria contradicts her masters goals who wins? Probably not equestria ...
3251569 Yes, but I felt at first that it didn't fit the tone of the fic, because of its lolrandom opening and almost 30Hs style of writing. I'm amazed I didn't describe the sun's rays as 'beams of fuckfire' or the like, given the mood I was in.
-Furthermore, thou makest serious assumptions on the creative capacity of our creations, Terminus.
Heh the way Luna attributes the creations of ponies to being machinations of Celestia or herself reminds me of how Shodan in System Shock 2 would take credit for 'The Many's inventions.
This fic is an utterly wonderful blend of serious and funny. I go from intrigued to excited to laughing and then back to intrigued all over again.
I fucking love it! Seriously, it's definitely one of the better stories I've read in quite a while, and not just here on fimfiction.
Also, emotional mixer. There's so many feelings storming about it's hard to keep track of them all! And poor Twilight seems to be the one that has to unravel to whole mess, fix the problem and then put it all back together. A tall order for anyone. I doubt it's going to be easy...
Looking forward to see what happens next. Do keep up the good work!
3345590 Ah, actually chapter 11 turned out to be much more complicated than I initially anticipated. Five dimensional beings are quite hard to conceptualise, and I think I've rewritten the thing five times now. The part I'd initially written may not even end up being in this chapter, because it came toward the end, and what I have in the middle makes it easily the longest chapter I've written so far. Plus, with a new university year, ponies have sort of fallen by the wayside a bit, sadly. Wish I could use hysterical magic to insert imaginary seconds into my day, just for writing ponefics, tbh.
Dear Celestia YESSSS!!!!!
MOOOOOR!!!!! I NEED MORE OF THIS TWILESTIA SHIP!!!!!!
Please and thank you.
also, Terminus the the master of jokes and making awkward moments hilariously embarrassing.
I can't wait till we get to the hot and steamy chapters.
Well, that happened. :D
Good to have you back! I hope that the next update is on his way. Because romance is a go!
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Celestia was going "Dear me yes!" at the end.
3248367I'd have to agree.
Small edit: added the long overdue OC tag for Terminus. I was kinda shirty about that before, because people will just come here and assume it's some sort of harem self-insert OC bullshit without reading a damn thing, but I think enough people have read it now for it to be reasonably safe from that brand of stupid.
Haha It's back! You didn't disappoint anyway. Great work!
D'awwwww
moarmoarmoar please
Fuck yeah, more smoochy smoochy!
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Of course! Although you'll probably have to wait for our fearless hero to stop hyperventilating first.
oh, Twerlit Spekkle......
You are truly the greatest of Unicorn heros!
So will we ever get any actual insight into what exactly Celestia and Luna are deifications of? Assuming they're actually gods of course...
Also, get together already you two idjits...
It seems that Terminus understands mortals better than Luna does. The time spent merged with Twilight are taking effect, I'd wager.
3248803 I need more of this. Any expectations as to when we might expect the next chapter?
That, that my good sir, is amazing.
Wow. Now THAT is a great way to wake up in the afternoon.
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Actually, I'd say it just understands the complexity of patterns that arise from simple systems, more than it... caring, for lack of a better word. It's a difference in philosophy, due to the way that Terminus' race worked their magic over geological timescales, sleeping away the ages and making small edits, whereas Luna and Celestia are more of the 'just poof it into existence' sort.
3250642
Provided I don't get cockblocked by Luna again, I should have it out within the next two weeks. I'd already written part of chapter 11, although I'm not sure how much of that will make the final cut. If it does, it'll probably be a long chapter, because for whatever reason I assumed I'd end chapter 10 with Twilight sleeping. Of course, things never go to plan. That kiss scene was entirely spontaneous after watching too much Adventure Time while drinking coffee. Honestly, I was worried the dream sequence was too stupid for the story, but so long as you guys seem to like it...
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I can't be the only one?
Ah, what a pleasant surprise! I had not expected another Collision today, but it would seem you sure did. Excellent, more reading.
Twilight came so very very close to having her dirty dirty way with Celestia. .. With Celestia's full consent
on another note
for some stupid reason I still worry about Terminus's actual goals and the goals of her master. Terminus feels trustworthy but we do not know if she is just trustworthy until X Y or Z happens. When the safety of equestria contradicts her masters goals who wins? Probably not equestria ...
3251186 Baby, given half the shit on this site, you REALLY don't need to worry about ANYTHING that comes from your keyboard being 'stupid', hokay?
Wuv woo, etc
(I'm going to count that two weeks off and make sure you get that chapter out )
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Finally... have an internet cookie.
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Yes, but I felt at first that it didn't fit the tone of the fic, because of its lolrandom opening and almost 30Hs style of writing. I'm amazed I didn't describe the sun's rays as 'beams of fuckfire' or the like, given the mood I was in.
3251582 dude
beams of fuckfire
do want
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*lel
It is alive. Excellent :3
3251186 Hey, as long as the dream sequence was an excuse for Twilight to make out with Celestia, I'm okay with it.
3251589
Seconded.
Heh the way Luna attributes the creations of ponies to being machinations of Celestia or herself reminds me of how Shodan in System Shock 2 would take credit for 'The Many's inventions.
This fic is an utterly wonderful blend of serious and funny. I go from intrigued to excited to laughing and then back to intrigued all over again.
I fucking love it! Seriously, it's definitely one of the better stories I've read in quite a while, and not just here on fimfiction.
Also, emotional mixer. There's so many feelings storming about it's hard to keep track of them all! And poor Twilight seems to be the one that has to unravel to whole mess, fix the problem and then put it all back together. A tall order for anyone. I doubt it's going to be easy...
Looking forward to see what happens next. Do keep up the good work!
3251186 Well, it has been two weeks and five days! Getting
I take it?
3345590
Ah, actually chapter 11 turned out to be much more complicated than I initially anticipated. Five dimensional beings are quite hard to conceptualise, and I think I've rewritten the thing five times now. The part I'd initially written may not even end up being in this chapter, because it came toward the end, and what I have in the middle makes it easily the longest chapter I've written so far. Plus, with a new university year, ponies have sort of fallen by the wayside a bit, sadly. Wish I could use hysterical magic to insert imaginary seconds into my day, just for writing ponefics, tbh.
3466591 That is understandable. I wish you well, and hope you eventually get to more Twilestia! This is a good story and shouldn't be rushed.
Gotta say, absolutely loved that last part with 'Twerlit Spekkle'.