When one is born of the egg, from that moment forward they are sworn servants of Queen Chrysalis. They share one mind, one body, one burning passion to follow their leader's plans to conquer all. However, under one twilight sky, from one of the eggs hatched fate itself in the form of a Changeling with strange powers and the odd strength of showing emotions that, if he applies himself, can do almost anything...perhaps even escape the hive and his Dark Queen's cruel iron hoof. Shedding his dark visage, he acts decisively.
There are elements of Dark, Adventure, Cussing, Light Blood, and Brief Implied Sex. This one's not for the foals by any means, nor will most of my work be.
Chapters (1)
Commence read...
A few grammer and spelling mistakes, good storyline but you could've spent more time on it.
*seethe* ...prooobably should've spell checked this one...sorry, everybody. I might proofread this later.
EDIT: Spellchecked, edited, and removed confusing PROLOGUE END thing at the bottom. Now the Incomplete tag makes sense. :D
By the way, expect more once I get past the planning and early development stages. If the family doesn't bother me too much, there should be more soon.
1751547 I went back through, edited the story, and removed the confusing "PROLOGUE END" at the bottom. Besides, I have more planned for this part of the story. It even includes the mane six. He DID say he had to get his bearings.
Did you drop dead?