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Twilight and her friends are going to take a trip to Canterlot. Twilight is able to prevent a bridge collapse and save her friends. But when they start to die one by one in mysterious accidents. It is up to Twilight to piece together what is going on and stop it.

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1: Why is this marked as incomplete? 2: There are a lot of grammar mistakes, capitalization mistakes, and spelling mistakes. Might want to touch up on them. 3: Nice concept :)

EDIT: Also, I've tracked this :)

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For this is but chapter one in a larger series. And I shall touch up, thanks for the heads up.

This is amazing.

Yay, Final Destination

that was...AWSOME:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::raritystarry::rainbowlaugh::ajsmug::yay:

Wow guys! Thanks for the positive feedback. I'm almost done with chapter 2. I'll try to get it on be the end of the week!

HOLY SHIT :toasty: :raritycry: :rainbowderp: :pinkiecrazy: :fluttercry: :moustache: :facehoof:

Looks cool! A few grammatical errors but I'm loving this! :pinkiehappy:

Only one thing... this is following the original movie a bit too closely (bridge... bus...) "not exactly"... but close... I'd suggest making it a little more unique.:twilightsmile:

Awesome so far! Can't wait to see where you go with this!

628685 too long of a wait DX

I'm just glad pinkie isn't the first to die.

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