In Canterlot Castle, a single protector guards over the Princesses of Day and Night. The Royal Guardian, a single unicorn chosen by Empress Faust herself to protect the Princesses at all times. But during an expedition to the northern border, a changeling attack kicks off the fires of war...and unearths a long lost royal....
besides a few grammer errors there are no run on scentences. also i like how you use descriptive words to explain whats going on. not to mention i like the feeling of being left in suspense. every thing flows together in a lovely manner and so far the story has me hooked
again a few grammatical error but im more hooked than i was 30 min ago....lets go part 4
GOD I LOVE THIS STORY!!!