Words cannot begin to describe how happy i am to see a update to this fic! That aside, hillarious chapter, he was so completly and utterly stoned! All his ramblings was just brilliant.
This is really good stuff! I'm so happy you updated the story again, It's one of my favourites. I have to say that for a 2 year hiatus you did a great job of writing the characters consistently. The only things that stuck out to me were Luna saying "Fuck", as I don't think equestrians know human curses, let alone ye-old Luna. And Celestia mentioning she's had past relationships, you mentioned a couple times in the previous chapters that the protagonist is her first lover.
Oh God. I need more human on pain pills. It reminds me of them giving me valium for my wisdom teeth. My whole family found out that Emma Watson is my celebrity crush. I found out, too. Then I tried to sing Ride of the Valkyries.
I love the way you portrayed Luna in the flashback sequence. You really captured the way I see Luna in my mind. I really hope that you'll do a Luna oriented HIE story someday.
Is this the first time there is no opening flashback? Regardless, this was an interesting chapter. It did nothing for the plot (well, outside the Quincy thing), but I still really enjoyed reading about a human under severe medication. It was somewhat surreal, even. XD
7563085 I know you probably know this by now, but keep in mind that this story was his first story ever published back in 2012. At that point he probably didn't know how to properly introduce a story yet. Now he probably looks back at this and regrets writing it as poorly as he did, kind of like how Flammenwerfer started out.
I know it is just some criticism, but do keep in mind of that. It most likely gets better from here on out.
Just wanted to say, I had a blast reading this. I was in hysterics at so many parts. This story covers many subjects well, but I adored this chapter. Well done sir!
I love this story so much. It's different. There is more realism in it than most stories. Even the medicational effects are good. Are you sure, you weren't on medication when you wrote this stunning chapter ?
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Oh. My. God!
I-it's alive...
It's alive.
IT'S ALIVE!!!!!!!
WOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
ill follow my previous statement Its Alive!
This chapter was entertaining to read and a nice hilarious counterpoint to the last one which tended towards a more serious tone.
For thousands of years it has laid dormant, who dares awaken it! SCATMAN DOES!
Words cannot begin to describe how happy i am to see a update to this fic!
That aside, hillarious chapter, he was so completly and utterly stoned! All his ramblings was just brilliant.
Kinda reminds me of Cheech and Chong.
Great! Two chapters per day!
Thanks to the author!
...and then they snored!
Yes! I believed in this story and it finally paid up! Sweet!
We hoped, we waited, we received.
Hallelujah brothers!
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Being a sponge sucks.
Story resurrections like this give me hope that all my other dead favourites will one day join this one in the land of the living
It's been so long that I have absolutely no fucking idea what's going on anymore.
If this is how amazing your work is after a hiatus I'm scared to say maybe you should go on hiatus more (other readers please don't kill me)
loved this so much
And it will take another 2 years forum more chapters
Awww, no glimpse into the past? Was hoping to see more "me" and Luna, maybe some pranks they pulled off...
This is really good stuff! I'm so happy you updated the story again, It's one of my favourites. I have to say that for a 2 year hiatus you did a great job of writing the characters consistently. The only things that stuck out to me were Luna saying "Fuck", as I don't think equestrians know human curses, let alone ye-old Luna. And Celestia mentioning she's had past relationships, you mentioned a couple times in the previous chapters that the protagonist is her first lover.
I think I may have had a hand in reviving the story by adding it to my list. Author must have gotten a notification for it.
im just laughing about his state xD its just amazing, i love her... what was i talking about i forgot... -made me chuckle :D
only tobad no beginnings part. i still find it a great read
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Oh God. I need more human on pain pills. It reminds me of them giving me valium for my wisdom teeth.
My whole family found out that Emma Watson is my celebrity crush. I found out, too.
Then I tried to sing Ride of the Valkyries.
Shit this is what painkillers do to you? I need to sledgehammer a tibia or two brb.
This was a really nice and sweet chapter i enjoyed it very much .
Celestia, 2016
I look forward to seeing more!
I'd be afraid of turning into a squishy absorbent, too.
So the moral of the story is don't do drugs.
stay in vegetables, kids
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Usually I just start over reading it when that happens.
7151866 Normally, I would, but it's 160 thousand words this time.
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Yeah, I get that. Usually it can take between 1 - 2 weeks to get caught up between all my obligations, but I like it better that way.
I love the way you portrayed Luna in the flashback sequence. You really captured the way I see Luna in my mind. I really hope that you'll do a Luna oriented HIE story someday.
7167758 Spoons!!!
Is this the first time there is no opening flashback? Regardless, this was an interesting chapter. It did nothing for the plot (well, outside the Quincy thing), but I still really enjoyed reading about a human under severe medication. It was somewhat surreal, even. XD
7167839 Indeed. I'd even go as far as to say it was the spooning of a lifetime.
7174224 ... that was... Never mind, I have no comment
7175794 No need to comment. I know what I have done. So, as punishment, I shall receive twenty lashes via spoon.
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that sounds amazing, dude
I have a sneaky suspicion Scatman did this drunk and or Stoned
7134846 tell that to spongebob
What seems to be the officer, problem?
So I just looked at the publish date and modification date...
4 years...
I don't see how some of you had the patience to wait 4 FUCKING YEARS.
The sex in this better be INTERSTELLAR.
7563085 I know you probably know this by now, but keep in mind that this story was his first story ever published back in 2012. At that point he probably didn't know how to properly introduce a story yet. Now he probably looks back at this and regrets writing it as poorly as he did, kind of like how Flammenwerfer started out.
I know it is just some criticism, but do keep in mind of that. It most likely gets better from here on out.
Just wanted to say, I had a blast reading this. I was in hysterics at so many parts. This story covers many subjects well, but I adored this chapter. Well done sir!
Oh no...
Ohnoohnohono!
AH! DRUGS AND PANICKING
I reached the end!
...
At least the pillow isn't trying to kill me.
no update in 6 months... i am disappoint.
7968051 hahaha. I would have thought the same but there is a new chapter today.
Drugs are the best.
I love this story so much. It's different. There is more realism in it than most stories. Even the medicational effects are good. Are you sure, you weren't on medication when you wrote this stunning chapter ?
He is GONE my dude XD