How i connected Equestria

by Purpleflower_editz2011

The portal

Clop!! Clop!!! A group of creatures follow a violet mare with a magical Maine.
A small group of alicorns look serious with a angry like expression.

The group of creatures stare quietly at the portal before entering. A galaxy mained alicorn walks in and whispers " auntie can I go into to the portal to watch them." The mare nodds and the creatures walk in then the mare nodds and enters with the other mare. Sunset watches and stays standing next to cadence knowing now she has a big responsibility in till twilight returns with her daughter.

Twilight wakes up seeing the cloaked creatures gone and her niece sleeping.
Twilight looks up confused having a thought about something is missing from a few moons ago.

Author's Note:

Cheetoss

Comments

[Purpleflower_editz2011]

The group of creatures stare quietly at the portal before entering. A galaxy mained alicorn walks in and whispers " auntie can I go into to the portal to watch them." The mare nodds and the creatures walk in then the mare nodds and enters with the other mare.

[Purpleflower_editz2011]

I need help to write the 3rd chapter as twilight as just arrived in the portal.