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During a battle with Tomura Shigaraki, Izuku Midoriya finds himself falling through a magical portal. When he wakes, he discovers that he's in Camp Everfree. Seeing some people needing help, he decides to be a hero not just by saving people from danger, but also by saving people from emotional problems. Now watch as our beloved cinnamon roll teams up with the Rainbooms and shows them how to go beyond... PLUS ULTRA!!!
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Interesting start, if a bit rushed. Definitely slow down the pace a little more to continue things, but this could be a very good story.
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Thanks! I do agree with the rushing part. I think I was trying to get as much basic knowledge of MHA into the start as possible.
Well, as they say: Go beyond...PLUS ULTRA!!!
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True that, my friend! True that!
Great story, can't wait for the next chapter
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Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
This story is basically writing itself!
Really enjoying the story so far. Nice balance of having Izuku be OP while still having Twilight play the major part in helping save the day. I have seen many stories nerf the character that should have been able to either hold their own or even defeat the villain, so it's nice to see that not happen to Izuku. Also is this going to be a harem fic or is Izuku just going to be an adorable chick magnet and it doesn't really go pass that?
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I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Yeah, I'm trying to make sure that everything is balanced.
This is going to be a harem fic.
This will be my very first one, so I apologize if it's not that great.
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No worries you are doing a good job on that front so far.
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Thanks, buddy!
At this rate, Izuku's going to explode from the embarrassment.
Still, fun read.
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Yup!
Mineta would be crying in blood right now!
Going nice and steady with the harem, instead of rushing right into it. Nice. I assume Izuku will live with Sunset and enroll at CHS next chapter.
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Yeah, no kidding!
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Yeah! Izuku needs to live somewhere and attend school anyway.
Also, thanks for the compliment.
I think it's pretty good. You did a great job. Don't sell yourself so short.
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Thanks, dude!
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You're welcome
lol. I assume his ability at analysis and figuring out the ideal way to use abilities allowed him to quickly surpass game master Sunset.
I assume now that things have or at least settling down, you will have more original events happen, before covering the specials. Great work as always keep it up.
Nice job on the chapter. Can't wait to read the rest. This'll be fun.
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😂 Yeah! Our boy knows how to win with analysis.
Before I continue with the specials, I think it's best for Izuku to spend time with the Rainbooms and get to know them. The next chapter will be about Izuku telling the Rainbooms about how he got the scar on his arm which will lead to the Rainbooms having even more respect and admiration for him.
Thanks for the comment!
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Thanks!
I am sorry but when I see T I usually end up reading a story that compares to the T rating after trying to read 5 chapters of PG rated wholesomeness and constantly seeing the word cinnamon bun used as a reference to a person I just can't I am sorry but I gotta down vote reason being pg wholesome goodness is definitely not T rating and excessive use of cinnamon bun to reference a person
How has this kid’s brain not been fried already?!
Not bad, but the last part felt weird. Why in the world would twilight ask for help from a complete stranger when the one she needs is right in front of her? Plus she told everything about magic to him too, which is something she's really insecure about.
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Well, this was the only thing I could think of that could put Izuku into the story.
I probably could've done the last part better. I was very excited to get this story going.
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Honestly, I have no idea!
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You could just have izuku ask for help not knowing he's in another dimension. And then the next day, know about the things happening at the camp slowly while thinking of a way to get back. Then he can start helping them with the magic. That's another thing. The chapters feel too fast. Try to slow down a little bit.
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I'll try to slow down a bit for the next chapter.
Oh this is going to be a harem. Should’ve seen that coming. Well not a big fan harem, but not bad other than that.
What will happen next?
Its pretty interesting.
Any plans for Spike?
Doesn't seem fair that the girls kept getting powers, but he gets NOTHING pretty much.
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I plan to have Izuku reveal his fight with Muscular to explain why his arm is scarred.
As for Spike, I'm not exactly sure what to do with him. Maybe he could be a pillar of emotional support like Tsu?
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Ok then.
Will Spike hear it too? He kind of disappeared after the scene of him waking Izuku up.
Why not let Spike get powers too?
It was a problem in EQG where he's stuck as a dog but also the fact that well.. he is either missing or just.. there(like a prop than a character). The girls kept getting powers but Spike is left with nothing pretty much, just left out hard.
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Yes, Spike will also hear the story.
Hmm... As for powers, you make a good point. He's a dog who speaks English. That's it.
I think I've got something in mind for him. Maybe he can turn into a dragon at will?
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Ok.
Maybe he gets his own Geode? Or something that puts him on par/part of the girls?
Given how his Equestrian counterpart turns out to be a Bearer(as shown in the series finale).
Becoming a dragon is cool. Would he be able to turn into human form too?
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Well, we'll see what happens.
What's up next?
Wow, nice chapter. The girls get to know how heroic Deku really is.
I'm usually one that hates this gag with Pinkie mainly because it's overused. Nothing against you. I just find it annoying. Just a little nitpick and at least it's not her breaking the fourth wall in a cringy attempt for the fic to get all meta, so It's fine.
I really don't want to end this comment on a poor note for a fic I still enjoy despite that one annoying thing, but there isn't really much else to note about this chapter, other than it's cool to see Izuku open up a bit more to the girls. There isn't really anything too special here and I originally wasn't going to comment, but I felt I might as well, since it has been quite a bit. Not that I am rushing you take as long as you need.
Leave him alone Rarity! My precious Baby Boy is already taken! I not sharing my Deku with anyone except for Ochaco! X(
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I'm thinking the Shadowbolts and the Dance Magic special.
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Ok.
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KO awesome story, liking how you’re making a harem that Deku is going to be super surprised! Hope to see some more chapters soon and maybe see him go on dates with each of the girls including some older ones like Celestia, Luna, Cheerile, hope the Dazzlings appears in the story too!
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I just make the Dazzlings make an appearance in this story! I think that Sonata will definitely love him. After all, we all know that Deku is a very good hero!
Pretty nice chapter
Aw, now I gotta wait for the next chapter. Oh well, should be interesting to see though.
Wait, Golf Course, I thought Filthy Rich was going to turn it into a Spa.
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KO probably got that mix up.
KO awesome chapter, Izuku have met the Shadowbolts save for Indigo Zap because she’s with her parents. The music contest will be something hopefully he can help settle it.
