Skyline Scoop is a small-time pegasus reporter for the Equestrian Times who is given the story of a lifetime: covering the Royal Canterlot Wedding. Although well-meaning in his intentions, some of his not-so-great decisions lead him on an adventure of fear, deception, and the betterment of himself.
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I had this on my favorites list (that i use for tracking lol ) for days now, see that still nobody commented so i will give it a shot, feel bad that nobody who read it left you a comment.
Its pretty good, just some stuff that doesn't really make sense and some typos here and there.
He is chief of his section or whatever but the most junior reporter on the job?
And he didnt mention Golden Luxury to the Chrysalis.
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Well, thanks for the comment! Sorry about not getting back sooner, my internet's been down. Anyway, thanks again for your comments. The story is currently undergoing revision (such as your second point you mentioned, haha...) and should be ready to go soon, maybe within the next week, depending on when I have time.
With the first point, funny story about that...I must have forgotten to remove one of the two. About halfway in, I decided to change up that one part of the story to make it more cohesive, but I must have accidentally left it in...good eye.
So yeah, I'll probably revise it soon enough.
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Good luck with that.
Looking at my comment, "the Chrysalis" pokes me in the eye but to lazy to edit it now that it has been there for so long.