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I’m really enjoying this so far!
"...Olds big block."
(Chuckles) Yea, brings back a LOT of memories...
AKA, a '69 Olds 88 with a 455. Burned those tires off rather quickly.
Oh, man. I forgot more than I thought from these early chapters. It's been a joy reading them again, almost like the first time.
btw in this chapter I found only one leftover slip into second person as far as errors go:
I'm really liking the fact they seem to be getting a bit more relaxed about each other. The openness is nice. I'm still waiting for the other shoe to drop though... Something's *funky* and I can't figure out what.
Great chapter.
So a complex about her appearance. I can roll with that.
Nobody bought Midnight because of her character?
I hope they will become friends after all, Midnight needs someone to hug and stroke her in a friendly manner)
Hnnnng the chapters are so much smaller in size than I’m used to!
But I love each update!!! Cant wait for more!!!
Okay why make a hybrid between Luna and Nightmare and note surprised they didn't make a pure Nightmare model for some would buy her likely in Nyx mode. Amd serioisly a dig at alicorn Twilight. Seriously folks that was always going to be an outcome.
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I didn't include it just to throw shade - I don't personally dislike her anyway. At worst, this is a just a light-hearted jab - as well as a detail worth noting for future reference.
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Interested to see if/how that detail carries forwards in the story (or if theres anything else like it). Dunno when exactly the ponies become "aware" during production but its gotta be awful to know that you're design/character was so unpopular the manufacturers put you on clearance
That ending was hilarious.
Aww no love for Princess Bookhorse?
Only 4 princess models huh. Guess including a baby alicorn is out of the question.