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That must have stung but it is understandable. I am glad we got this from Midnight's POV.
So, this is expected. It's stupid to count on anything more at the moment. Midnight has recently healed her wounds and has begun to understand the value of a friend.
At the time of the confession, Midnight was not afraid of John and did not insult him. This is already a huge progress.
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Hate the be that Twilight bot. The kid is understandable but the mom. Holy crap. Karens are adults that were not spanked.enough as a kid
He confessed and still has his head
That's what we call progress
It really is weird what children will find scary at times. When I was a kid a Tom and Jerry cartoon utterly terrified me by having Tom look dead eyed at the camera and intone βDonβt you believe it.β In a weirdly sonorous echoey voice. In hindsight I have no idea why it effected me as badly as it did, but at the time it was horror incarnate.
I know you responded to my previous comment about it, but I still feel like there is more to that poor Twilight bot.
Just sayin'.
(Keep up the great work. John's and Middie's interactions are fantastic.)
I wonder if we'll find that Twilight bot in the junkyard next??
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I once had a dream consisting of a void of moving, recursive, monochrome geometric patterns and angry voices back when I was like eight years old. It terrified me, and I still don't know why.
Love it. Absolutely love it. Feels realistic, feels natural.
Damn they met the dreaded Karen, wonder if that's the last they will see of the twilight bot??????.
Also I guess midnight rejected him because she doesn't have a single romantic bone in her body and doesn't really know wtf shes feeling but is tactful enough and smart enough to be civil about it,so I'm guess the "romance" won't go anywhere unless/until some others thing happens later down the story where she gains some advice from a girl or some introspection.
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...that's both mildly horrifying and absolutely possible. 'Karen' is just the sort of person to 'get rid of' a 'defective product' because it disagreed with her worldview somehow.
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John owns a (mostly) car scrapyard, not a junkyard though. The only reason Midnight ended up here was because John was offered good money to accept some industrial scrap once or twice.
Now that I think about it, why did the company even decided to dump their scrap here instead of taking it to a processing facility for smelting? It's not like it's a secret they make pony bots, besides they're legal. And they don't dump bio ponies like Midnight here either - she's only here because she took a ride in one transport to escape.
Refreshing to see a story where feelings aren't mutual. I'm presuming things probably develop later but its a nice break from the standard "both characters stay silent for X chapters, confess, and then everything works out" flow
John and Midnight are going to be the bumbling duo who accidentally kicks off the pony AI rebellion aren't they?
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Almost too real, eh? Heh.
Midnight needs some accessories if she's going to "terrorize impressionable children and other ponies". Something like a spiked collar and pointy earrings... maybe studded chaps?
You know, this makes me wonder how the Chrysalis models are doing since they're a villain too.
I even feel sorry for Twilibot, it seems he is treated like some kind of dog or slave. I also think that these bots are very expensive and their owners are mostly spoiled and ill-mannered children and their parents.
Midnight could disguise herself as Princess Luna (the differences are minimal, actually)
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I remember that Tom and Jerry episode. Loved that cartoon.
And yeah, what scares us as kids can be so dumb sometimes. I haven't had a nightmare for at least 15 years but used to have quite a few when I was a kid. The dumbest one, looking back, was about me getting tickled to death by a swarm of Jinjos from the game, Banjo Kazooie. Still can't believe that of all things terrified me.
Great chapter. Not how I hoped it would go but progress
Pretty well done chapter.
Ooo, might have to take back my comment on the last chapter a little.
Speaking of things from the last chapter...
Oop, things are about to get really spicy.
Uh oh
Though I'm glad that conversation went as well as it did.
Notice she only denied having feelings for him (internally) because she doesn't know she's capable. So we'll pretend her verbalized denial with a hidden "yet" at the end. π
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Chrysalis model is one thing, but the others? Imagine what a Discord model could do.
$10 says the Karen took a pic of his license plate and called the cops on both of them. We'll see how J and Middie handle it.