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slowly but surely.
Have to wonder if the ponies naturally separate themselves by type or something. Mostly I just imagine the panic of someone going into one area of the enclosure and seeing half a dozen or more Pinkie Pies turn as one to greet them.
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She really does have the personality of a cat. The more you push, the more pissed off she gets. Leave her to her own devices, and she'll warm up slowly.
Awwwww
Another great chapter, midnight is now confirmed to be almost a friend/is one and more backstop about midnight which raises the possibility that Theodore might also have some cyborg ponies but the "dumb" ones.
Just saying if you change their relationship to something more deeper you could add a human female character as a old friend or apprentice to help stoke the flames of jealousy and other stuff.
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So, at some point I do have a one shot in this universe that sort of gives a glimpse into this bit of past. I'm not for certain when I'm going to write it, or if I'm going to have it as a sort of interlude chapter or standalone story. I suppose whenever I figure that out, it will probably come quick, as we are just about at the point in the story that I originally wrote it.
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If it's a topic open for discussion, then I'd very much like all those "bonus" chapters to be included in this fic. They've helped shape their world and gave me a better understanding of what's going on with the characters and what they've been through (and in one instance resurrected an old speculation topic back to life). I think they're valuable part of the experience.
If you do decide to add them then your idea of "Interlude" chapters is IMO the best way to do it - so that they're marked as additional content but are still part of the story (easy to skip, hard to miss).
It's a wonderful story.
Now it's clear why Middy is trying to seem annoyingly proud and angry. It's not in the program. She's alive. She had a hard life. With the help of aggression, she tries to hide her scars and fears.
The Mysterious Client (Teddy) seems to be a robotics enthusiast. Perhaps he collects more "smart" robots. But these are just robots. Midnight is not a robot. If I understand correctly, is her nervous system based on a biological brain. Ted can't know that. This should be EquisCo's secret. I think Midnight and John should get the information from Ted. It can be useful. But you can't trust him. Midnight should pretend to be a tin can or defective.
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At that point a pull a lethal company amd dive on a land mine
Eeee great story!
And that is disgusting.
Wonder if the other's vapid nature was genetically controlled or due to physical interference?