New world mean new enemies

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Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #1 · Dec 5th, 2023 · 3 · · Ch2: small ones and big one ·

Question before I start reading. Is there a reason why the Anthro tag is here? With how massive Star Wars is, talking ponies as MLP has them fit right in with no changes needed.

Unless it applies to other species instead.

Elric of Melnipony

Elric of Melnipony #2 · Dec 5th, 2023 · 2 · · Prologue : fight for nal system ·

/Break/

Please don't do that. There's a perfectly good button for a page break in the story editor. If you must use something else, though, at least center it so it doesn't look like regular text.

Let the Republic fleet come within range of the Bismarck cannons.

Why would a ship in the universe of Star Wars be named after Otto von Bismarck?

The super tactical droid, W1SH

Based on your user name, I wondering if this story should have the "Self-Insert" tag.

its pink and blurple paint scheme

Seriously, "blurple"? Well, that tells me I can just stop reading right here. This is clearly not a story to be taken seriously.

Imperial-Von-wish

Imperial-Von-wish #3 · Dec 5th, 2023 · · · Ch2: small ones and big one ·

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Yes, it because at the time I felt it would seem reasonable to put on when writing the story. It was all so more how I say drawling border planning.

Imperial-Von-wish

Imperial-Von-wish #4 · Dec 5th, 2023 · 1 · 1 · Ch2: small ones and big one ·

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I will say that that was big fault on my side for using the word break for when their going into new scene

while the second thing you pointed out was more of a chose due to wanting to show that the ship itself is out of place in the star wars universe.

I understand were you are coming from seeing the name W1SH but they are not me at all. Their name is just abbreviation for their full rank and name, which is warrant 1st sergeant Halon. But the word blurple is a color but not true word in the since of
a word but thanks you for the review on my story

AgentKorpsman