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Acalanatha (Accie)


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Here is a sample of my writing I entered for the Starswirl Academy http://www.zap-apple.com/

This is a story of how the protagonist first meets Fluttershy and falls in love with her and how she comes to love him too.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 4 )

This is just a sample of my writing style.
This story was an entry for Fluttershy writer for the visual novel Starswirl Academy.
I won't be doing any edits unless there's a blazing error.
I'd enjoy any critiques or comments to help me improve my writing.
I've got my second entry and a third unfinished story but unless people really love these, I probably won't be writing more of these.

Thank you,

Accie

This chapter is actually the story I submitted for the second round.

Sadly, I wasn't chosen.
Any critiques or comments to help me improve are welcomed.

the story is going perfect in my view keep it up your gonna go far kid:rainbowlaugh: gotta love music referances

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