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"Just because tomorrows art will be better doesn't mean todays art has anything wrong with it." (Mister Technodad, Happy Birthday My Son)
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Well damn, this might be as far as I let this story go. What do you guys not like about it? I can't fix it if I don't have input.
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I just found it so Imma gonna try it
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well, thanks. I hope you like it just know that only the first chapter was rewritten the rest weren't and they show it badly.
I never realized how much I wrote for this! I went looking when I thought something was missing. Sure enough Theres around 200 pages over 40k words that aren't here! I'll split it and post it but it's just as bad as the rest.
It might not be my place to critique but what on earth was this chapter?
It was all over the place with scenes, punctuation, capitalisation, and speakers.
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exactly that's the issue I had and it only gets worse. I tried to fix it in a chapter that isn't on here (it sucks worse). I addressed the issue in (For what it's worth.) but do to the timing I wrote it and how quickly I wrote it I never thought about that. Some people like that though? Like I said it's a truly bad story but some still like it so I leave it here.