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Everypony Forgets Anon’s Birthday

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It’s Anon’s special day. Unfortunately for him, it seems nopony remembered it, except for one.

Just a heartwarming short story I thought of whilst on the train home. Please let me know what you think, as it’s my first time!

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MJK

MJK #1 · May 23rd, 2023 · 1 · ·

Cute little story, while not checking is understandable getting brushed off the extra two times might have drove point harder. It seems like there's too much space between lines and that some of the sentences could be squashed into a single paragraph. An alright job for your first story.

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