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Pinkie talks

There is a time and a place for long and deep conversations and, Pinkie does not understand either of them.

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Mystic Sunrise

Mystic Sunrise #1 · May 7th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Sweet Twilight, what the hell happened to all of the paragraphs? And then there's this.

"I mean if the sky was pink of course." "Though if the sky was rainbow then ponies with rainbow mains like Dashie would blend into the sky." "Luckily she is blue, not the same blue as the sky is in real life luckily or she would look like a floating mane and tail when she is airborn" Twilight who seems to be annoyed at this point for some reason, tries to ask Pinkie a question of her own." "Pinkie please"

Never have two people talking in the same paragraph. Every paragraph past this has the same problem. Fix everything, and it is a funny story idea.

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