• Member Since 10th Nov, 2022
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Matriximal


I'm a story teller newbie. So my story has chance to have bad grammar. Because english isn't my first language.

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This is story about Marcelino Rossi / Marco (Main Protagonist) who has been trapped on Equestria because the mistake he made. He needs to save Equestria from Tyrant and to return to his world again.

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Fio main for life

"This is story about Marcelino Rossi / Marco (Main Protagonist)."

Oh, sweet Celestia. You never start a description like this. And the short description isn't any better in that regard.

Knowing the character's name does help.

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Ikr. But my character's name doesn't exist yet :/

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