This is well written keep up the good work^^ ignore the dislikes! :D

Why are these stories so prevalent? If there’s a zebra (who isn’t Zecora) in an M rated story they are going to try and breed/enslave the mares. It isn’t even shocking or sexy at this point, it’s just super played out.

I guess it’s better than Fall of Equestria—actually it is an obvious copycat of that. Almost to the T just replace caribou with zebra. *yawn*

Eh, if u ask me, better stick to your excellent FoE story with Alseric and Luna

Nice, pretty good for a prologue. Hope we can see more!

"Sir, we got a bogey."

"Another fall of equestria?"

"Negative sir, Zebradom."

"Fuck sake, well, what have we got available?"

"We got the Confederacy of Independent Systems lead by General Kalani, the spies, Colonel Von Krieger with the Germane Empire, Perseus, and Shockwave."

"Send em all in. Let's send the Equestrians some good ol fashioned liberty."

"Understood, anti-zebradom payload away."

Cant wait to see Celestia and Cadance breeding

It's dirty and sensational. But goodness gracious I like it.