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28.130 words... Challenge Accepted
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cool, hope ya like it.
wow that was beautiful for a first chapter heres a moustache you deserve it
Great read.
This tiok me forever read, thanks for getting rid of my boredom
Wow just...wow. now that was one great read
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Glad ya liked it.
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Yeah it was a long one, and no prob.
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Thanks.
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Awesome, but the applause is unnecessary.
Thank you all for taking the time to read it.
1324491 your welcome. I hope you've got more coming
Long... very long..
but awesome!
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Yeah later on I will be adding more stories, not sure if anyone would like them though.
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Glad you liked it, I really need to break them down next time so it wont be so long.
This was a great use of 2 hours
Wow this is one long and good romance story!
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Glad you both liked it.
you sir are amazing.
I really loved this. I wonder if you made a second one to wrap up what happens next
i really loved this although there a few things i would like to point out with this story
between the beginning and the middle part you seems to often times time skip within the same paragraph which might confuse the readers. also the start of the story and the romance are very weak which i guess that's why this story has a surprising amount of downvotes. some of the parts felt rush and the middle of the story was kind of boring to read because it was basically a set of repetition with work,work and work.
another thing was that anon and AJ weren't exactly fleshed out and AJ felt a bit out of character with all the expansion she comes off as a bit greedy. the incredible amount of income seems to be over the top imo but that's just my opinion.
all in all it had a few shortcoming but i really enjoyed the story! i was wondering why it had the sad tag but i found out eventually why. the whole thing with rainbow made me think of a different scenario but i do wonder if rainbow did have a crush on anon. i also really liked how there was conflict between anon and AJ. many fics forget to add such things to a relationship and make them seem all lovey dovey so props to you for that.
again great story and definetely worth a fav in my book. a shame not many people appreciated it
It was a great fanfic but I wish twilight came with the prosthetic legs its to bad I did not get to read that because I would of loved to see applejacks reaction also I didn't like that stallion strong oak damn what an asshole and oh I first thought the sad part of the fanfic would be cheating but good that it was not