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fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #1 · Oct 14th, 2022 · 3 · 2 ·

“Wemon”

Elsaack

Elsaack #2 · Oct 15th, 2022 · 2 · ·

There really needs to be more stories with Shining and Rarity, they make a great pair. It's a good, hot hookup you've written but the presentation is botched. You really need to get someone to proofread, or just reread to catch all the errors. There are tons of places where you used sound-alike word or misspellings that are really noticable when reading through. It's hard to thumbs up a story that hasn't had a basic review done on it.

CharmingQuil

CharmingQuil #3 · Oct 15th, 2022 · · ·

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Fair point.

I have an app that looks over my work and is supposed to edit it, showing me misspelled words and offer suggestions to take certain ones out. But I guess you can't always get a machine to do a humans job.

If you know anyone, please let me know.

Elsaack

Elsaack #4 · Oct 16th, 2022 · 1 · ·

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That explains it, it was too regular and always spelled correctly to be an accident. I figured auto correct was happening somewhere in your process. Believe me, I understand that after spending awhile writing you don't want to reread everything you wrote. And when you do force yourself to you gloss over exact wording because you know what you wrote so you miss little things.
There are various groups on this site that proofread authors works, it's just a matter of knowing the group and probably asking for entry. Afraid I don't know any off the top of my head.

CharmingQuil