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Hmmm, there's some potential here already, I'll say. Keep an eye on this to see where things go from here.
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Ah, thank you. If you don't mind me asking, is there anything in particular you like about it so far?
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The confusion, layers of different thoughts competing with one another. There's something more happening here and Twilight is either blocking it out, or some outside influence is being exerted upon her. So many possibilities for what could be happening.
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Ah, thats a good answer. Thank you. :] I may create another chapter today.
What's keeping them from doing that with someone else?
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Well, there is an answer to that-- but I'm afraid i can't say yet. Spoilers and shit.
silently rest? peacefully? shes going to die??
I am intrigued. You have some mechanical issues throughout, but beyond that, this is shaping up to be a good story. I'm interested in seeing where this goes, if you end up writing more.