I would like to thank the fantastic ‘Milkmo’. If not for his proofreading and patient editing, this novel can never be this good. Thank you, buddy!
Pinkie suffers a lot from her pain, so she decides to seek the help of an expert--the legendary Nurse Redheart.
This story is SFW, and its focus is massage itself. If you wanna seek some relaxation by reading, you are in the right novel.
I also wanna add that the story happens in ‘Humanized Equestria’, which means ponies now look like normal humans.
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I have to say, I have never read a story about someone getting a massage before, so congrats on being the first!
I have mixed feelings about this story, which I realize may stem from my confusion over what this story is supposed to be. You have a very simple premise, but you don't really have a plot to speak of. You can do a story like this well, but doing so typically requires leaning heavily on artistic prose or something else besides the plot itself. If you were trying to write the literary equivalent of ASMR, then I can see where you were going with this, but I think this story falls short of what it would have needed for that. The prose was much too simple to carry the story, so the story ends up feeling empty and pointless. That being said, the prose is not bad, it's just not enough to make up for a lack of engaging plot.