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A Journey in Twilight

A familiar Purple unicorn? Lost in the snow and alone, traveling south.

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Comment posted by Napstab deleted Aug 17th, 2022

Napstab

Napstab #2 · Aug 17th, 2022 · · · Dawn ·

Dunno how much how I'm gonna write but, enjoy!

Flora Blossom

Flora Blossom #3 · Aug 19th, 2022 · · · Dawn ·

Hopefully we can get more chapters to read more.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #4 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · Dawn ·

This certainly had some very descriptive imagery, but it was lacking a bit in substance. Also, you had some awkward phrasing and mechanical issues that made it a bit difficult to follow what was going on.