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There's plenty of emotional trauma to go around in this one.
Fourth chapter just went up. For those of you keeping track at home, this is the last 'original' chapter to be posted. After this they will all be new chapters, starting on Friday.
I like the fact that as soon as I finished reading the last chapter, I reloaded the page and a new one appeared. Great job with consistency. (Will edit after chapter is read)
Edit: Well, I guess I was wrong about thinking Soarin's not the one that died
Missing space between the sentences, fourth paragraph in.
The pegasi preening their partners bit is just instant headcanon for me.
I love how they all keep conspiring to feed Dash extra. That's a nice touch.
This is so good, and sad. The way you build all that happiness just so we know how much is lost.
It's like stomping on a puppy using a kitty as a shoe. Cruel, and well done too.
What do you mean last original chapter But it is so good I can't wait for Friday YOU BETTER NOT BE LATE!
Oh my god this series ;_;
The balance between the sadness and joy of life in this is great.
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The last chapter from the original version. Starting Friday, all new chapters will be posted.
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Oh so this is a rewrite now I understand I was a little confused at that moment
I have a good feeling about where this is going. I wonder which of the little hints are red herrings.
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Awesome! I was waiting for this ^^
Well I can say, of all the spa scenes (of which there are A LOT in this fandom), the one in this chaptet is the best I've ever read.
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Awesome!
Did anyone notice "Cloud Fire" is a reference to the Wind Thief?
That was an amazing story, btw. I read it only last week, and I eagerly await a sequel
My my. I am ever so confused?.... Did Soarin' die? was he the one in the coffin during the funeral everpony keeps talking about? or what? But I digress. Only time can tell. The Witches Hat shows very high climax and very gentle low resolution but I have noticed that the end of every chapter there is all ways a small sex scene. whether it is of Rainbow Dash and Soarin', Or Rarity and Rainbow Dash. or even small arousing parts such as the spa time with Aloe and Lotus. Anyway, Nice job on the chapter author I'll keep reading, but the chapters are so long but I must confront to see a perfect story~
I'm looking forward to moving into the uncharted territory of the new chapters!
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"Like stomping on a puppy using a kitty as a shoe"? Congratulations, that's a... a vividly disturbing yet apt simile.
There should be a "the" between "into" and "knot."
SO it was Soarin who died.
That's a no on cleaning the couch before anypony woke up, then.
Ruuuuu-uuude.
Or not? I don't know. I think I misread the subtext? Yeah, I totally missed the mark. Completely bombed the reading comprehension test. Saw what I apparently wanted to see, not what was. It was shameful. Shameful and pathetic. And perhaps even a bit weird.
Perhaps I should call it a night for my psychic powers. Too bad I don't know how to turn them off. I guess you'll all just have deal with them being on the fritz and spewing nonsense out of my fingers. (I have now disavowed any responsibility for how wrong things I say may be)
"Mares." That's an odd way to spell "I."
Seriously, Rarity. Trying to convince others to have as much meaningless sex as you will neither make you hate yourself less, nor force them to start hating themselves. That you try is pathetic.
Not that there are many ponies who can pull off giving completely unsolicited sexual advice, admittedly. It's really not a flattering style on anypony, so to speak.
And then there's this stuff. My psychic powers are telling me that Dashie is with foal, and everypony knows but her. Or possibly just nopony has the heart to tell her it's not actually a secret. But I just don't know if I can trust them. Surely once they've had a chance to regenerate their mojo overnight, they'll have a more plausible explanation for why Dash hasn't been flying and ponies keep giving her extra food? Or at least admit they don't know. But for now, the only other theory they'll even talk about is that her friends don't think she's been eating enough since Soarin's death, but obviously that's just silly. She's not gaunt, she's just got an athlete's physique. And they're just so sure they can answer this now.
See? I told you! Take that, psychic powers! I told you your theory was stupid.
I mean, really. Just because I backed you up for ten chapters on Blood is Thicker Than Friendship, despite a complete lack of corroboration (do you think that's ever going to update again? I would kind of like a chance to be finally proven right) does not mean you can use the same theory anywhere and expect me to just accept it. I am disappointed that you would think otherwise.
I'll just take that right now as a "yes" to my question last chapter. I think I can still manage that much psychicing accurately.
But now I feel compelled to ask why. What reason has dictated that there be a sex scene at the end of each chapter? For though not all things are of great thematic importance, and some reasons are too trivial to be worth asking about, there is always some reason.
Unfortunately, I think I need to be more psychic to make a good guess. So now is a pretty terrible time to ask.
This has really drawn me in. Excellent job, Mr./Mrs./Ms. Author
Finally! Finally someone goes and depicts preening accurately! I've gotten so sick of people assuming it involves ripping out broken feathers and nothing else. And, as another point in your favour, the mutual preening instinct was a detail that didn't occur to me.
Soarin'. Why u be dead?
Poor dash. I don't think that I've ever come across a fic in which one of her loved ones dies.
This is an excellent story. Chapter 4 and I'm already hooked. Good job.
I can't be reading this at work... it's far too good.
I fancy myself an erotica author, but you've shown me up on many levels. I can't compare to this level of emotional involvement.
“No, Dash, it's not just a spa. It is one of the best spas.” Rarity's face lit up as she described the Lotus Luxury Spa. “Even in Fillydelphia, there are only a few establishments that pamper as well as this!”
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Her chest, her belly, her nipples. She wound her hooves in his mane and tried pushing his head lower, but he would not be rushed.
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Have to stop here for today. I'll try finishing up tomorrow.
"High Flight", almost any pilot's favorite poem. I love that.
Oh, fuck that bitch! Haha!
I also love the more subtle bits of humor in things, like Dash saying her day was fine after Rarity's long rant. Not every joke has to be a BIG joke, as this story grasps well.
I love how, despite the occasionally sad emotions and some dirty parts, the story always snaps back to feeling very pony, for lack of a better word. It's actually an incredibly relaxing story a lot of the time, even during the dirty parts, which is something I like, as I'm not a clopper.
Poor Rainbow Dash, though. And Rarity. These are two hurt souls and I'm excited to see them find each other.
This fic is truly a cut above. The way you described the interplay of colors in Sweetie’s hair is how I feel about the emotions and tone of this story. From joyful, to bittersweet, to heart-wrenching, and back again, it all works so well. I particularly liked how you kept us guessing about who had died. At first I thought it must be Tank, but it makes sense it was Soarin. Finally, as both a SoarinDash and Raridash shipper, I must say that this right here - this hits the spot.