There is hate within us all. It can cloud our feelings and sight, allowing us to commit horrible actions to those around us, and if the hatred is strong enough, it will cause irreversible effects.
A mare was consumed with so much hatred and scorn for the day that symbolizes love and happiness, she commits a deed so vile that it ruined the very land she once called home.
With a land tarnished with naught a single soul in sight, the mare is forced to live with the consequences of her actions for eternity.
Chapters (1)
Was an ok read, but conclusion leaves something to be desired. Unless you’re planning another fix that bit about “this future wasn’t meant to be.” Should’ve been clarified.
Otherwise I liked the story some. The descriptions and building hopelessness were nice if not a lol repetitive. Also a couple places where wording can be a little confusing.