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Summer Dancer

On Wednesdays, we wear PINK!


Starlight Glimmer had heard of the rumors. She thought it couldn't be possible, she had finished off those mares decades ago. But she had to come see it for herself...confirm those little rumors and put them to rest for good.

Unfortunately for Starlight, her return is exactly what they've been hoping for.

Inspired by the ending of FNAF 3.

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Comments ( 63 )

I wish I could say I didn't cry... But the tearstains on my glasses would call me a liar.

This made me laugh and feel sad and happy it was a roller coaster of emotions in this one shot I congratulate you :pinkiehappy:

My heart..... it is in pain from how many feels I am experiencing.

Six balloons?
What about Spike?

I've gotta' say, this was a fantastic blending of MLP and Five Nights at Freddy's, with great incorporation of original elements as well! It was certainly a satisfying story that can actually stand alone pretty well without deep knowledge of FNAF, in my opinion. Great work! :D

I never thought a story involving Five Nights At Freddy's would make me tear up and cry a little.

Congratulations for proving me wrong.

Manly tears were shed this day

Who's Spike?


I love the smell of a dead Glimmer in the morning.

Also. Sunset Shimmer bot.


Twenty Three lit candles flickered and glowed brightly, giving the room a safe and warm feeling.

Why is the three capitalized? It's not the first word of the sentence, and even if there was wrote like"Twenty-three", it would still be lowercase.

6038294 He never made it out :ajsleepy:

For a comedy writer, you sure know how to give way to emotions other than laughter. Great job!

6041016 Well. That's... sad. Hopefully the eventual deterioration or destruction of his machine body will set him free...

6042868 Wouldn't Spike still have an important role to play? He has to provide the laughter for Fnaf 3 so the security guard could survive Springtrap.

You have my applause, and a few of my tears. And a Pinkie. Fantastically done. :pinkiehappy:

So, where's Spi-oh never mind, he's the Balloon Dragon. :P

Brilliant Job Summer Dancer. Almost teared up. Just a wee bit. But hey i'm rather proud of ya. Taking your story writin out o da norm fer a bit. Loved the story. Funny thing is, I wrote a FNAF story with an adult Scootaloo in it to. But none of the ponies made it out alive cause, they weren't ponies. They were humans. Cause....... logic?:pinkiecrazy:

Quick Edit: the game ain't that scary and you got it just about right. Except for the addition of BB in the restaurant. But other than that you got it right. I'd love for your own take on the video game itself. If you ever take this one tip if you ever play it

Always expect the jumpscares. If you need to, put headphones on and when you know you're gonna die take the headphones off. Works everytime

Nother quick edit: cuts scare factor down by, like, 50% at the least

One last edit: sorry for the long message. Just...... word

FNAF? Yus. :pinkiecrazy:

*one read-through later*

That. Was. Awesome! :pinkiehappy: First of all, I loved how your story was not as predictable as I thought it would be. I loved how you gave a reason that Pinkie Pie's Pizza was opened in the first place, how you have Starlight Glimmer have the role as The Purple Guy. I loved how the other mane five resolved their "unfinished business" at the end.

By the way, since you said so yourself that you mainly right comedy, I think you did a great job at pulling off the feels here. Your writing gave it a heartwarming touch, actually.

Theres barely anything I can find to dislike this story. I really hope to see more from you in the future. :pinkiehappy:

Oh wow. I like it.

That made me cry bummer I being sad. (squee)

Hey remember me? It's been so long? Didn't know you made this. Amazing job.:pinkiesad2:

6231512 Hey, So Long comment quartet buddy! Thanks for the follow! :pinkiehappy:

6231564 Wouldn't make us a quartet if we didn't.:yay:

I don`t cry in stories. Barely, if any.
I wasn`t crying.

Not until you *sniff* put in that last sentence....:pinkiesad2:
*Now were both crying...*:pinkiesad2:
Nice story, and thank you for joining and putting it in FNaF forever!:twilightsmile:

First Read:
*blackout before I even commented*

The feels still stick...

Scootaloo gazed up at the twinkling stars, smiling through her tears. “I’m…I’m just happy, Jitterbug. That’s all.”

I have to admit that I was feeling like crying throughout the story, but this line was what made it all change and gave me an excuse to.

:raritydespair: I cried, like omigosh, that ending was just so- I can't evn to begin! :raritycry:

For the Record, I am not a Hardcore FNAF Fan (I'm only interested in the Lore of FNAF) but this is kind of good. A good story to read just for seeing Starlight Glimmer getting killed (TAKE THAT COMMUNISM) but the ending is full of Feels Although I didn't cry due to Feels overload (the only things that make me cry are Vegeta's Death in the Majin Buu saga, Maya's Farther fusing her with her dog in Fullmetal Alchemist Brotherhood, Arith's Death in Final Fantasy 7 and My Little Dashie, and Xion's Death in Kingdom Hearts 385/2 Days). But still this is a good MLP/FNAF Fanfiction. Nuff Said

Comment posted by PokemonVirus deleted Nov 22nd, 2015

Ach, the feels man, they hurt. Just a few words to say:


But over all, really good story man.

Damn. That ending tho.

I... I'm about to break down sobbing in school... WHY YOU DO THIS TO ME?! :raritydespair: :fluttercry:

That got me when i saw that SCOOTALOO is the mom at the end :(. The FEELS MAN> and to have Dash's SPirit circle her :(

"Management has also been made aware that the spring Twilight animatronic has been noticeably moved. We would like to remind employees that this costume is not safe to wear under any circumstances."-Phone Mare

The disturbingly familiar balloons floated past them, save the cerulean balloon, which circled around the mother before joining the others into the starry night.
“Whoa…that was really cool….uh, mommy…why are you crying?”
Scootaloo gazed up at the twinkling stars, smiling through her tears. “I’m…I’m just happy, Jitterbug. That’s all.”

Oh my god that is amazing. I love you dude!!!

You listen to MandoPony too? :rainbowkiss: *squeals*

7343072 He's the best there is! :pinkiehappy:

Says something about a story about the afterlife when it moves even an atheist. Good work.

There were many stories that made me ALMOST cry, but this one came the closest... :fluttercry:

That was, that was amazing!:fluttercry:

*cough* i stole the starlight is the killer thing from you *cough*

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