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Erstwhile Tail


Just a new writer trying to express the joy that I get from writing to the readers. (follow me on Twitter: @History_Pone)

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Aileron is a Unicorn from Manehatton, she's one of the best astronaut ponies in Equestria. After being hand picked by the people at the Equestrian Space Bureau or E.S.B for short, She and a small team are sent to help repair a major hull breach in Lunar 5, one of many recently commissioned space stations orbiting the moon
, but when they arrive, they find that not all is as it seems... Now they are in a fight not just for their own lives, but the lives of all their friends and family back on earth. This... is Lunar 5.

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Comments ( 9 )

interesting start.

What's an Aileron?

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An Aileron is a part of the main wing of a aircraft that controls the pitch/roll of the craft, these are what allows a craft to do barrel rolls and go sideways
here is a simple diagram I found on the web:
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If your interested in how exactly the physics works,

, this video will explain that and a bit more about the other sets of flaps on a plane. These usually apply to all fixed wing aircrafts though size and shape do vary.

It goes into a bit more detail then you probably need but it does get the message across, hopefully this helps you, have a good one, and Happy new year! :)

well, i do like these aerospace-themed pony names! and things are definitely serious when Princess Twilight is getting involved

Princesses addressing their subjects as "my little ponies" never gets old! and it's certainly quite the crew of misfits being assembled for this world-saving mission. very cinematic!

the reference to Jeremy Clarkson and Travis and Lukowitz having very distinctly non-pony names did make me double-take, and go back to check if this was some sort of hybrid world where modern humans and ponies existed side-by-side

can't have a scene of a crew of misfits blasting into space without one of the non-astronauts passing out from the gees. and that's certainly a cliffhanger!

ah, the classic ponies with guns problem! and there's nothing wrong with using the same solution as another fic's. there aren't too many ways to make it work, after all

tying in the top-secret space monsters to what really happened with Luna and Nightmare Moon is a great way to make this a part of MLP lore. thanks for writing!

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The Jeremy Clarkson was just a Top Gear reference to his iconic ‘time for the smug face’ line from a Top Gear episode

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