A sad chapter.

Very fun story so far, I always been hopping for a good HiE Asylum story, where the ponies think the former human is just crazy, unfortunately they never go very far..

She was hard set on trying to look okay but that only confirmed my suspensions[/suspicious].

You might want to try using a text to speech program, like I do to better pick up on homonyms that you occasionally make, not relying so much on spellcheckers so much. I would suggest Balakolka it's easy to use, and more importantly FREE, It has helped me a lot in the quality of own writing in English.

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Thank you so much for the recommendation! I absolutely will check it out and probably use it, I'd also like to give my thanks to you as a critic and reader. You've jump-started my creations from a small find and have been keeping an eye on my stories, I would not be here as far as I have without you. Thank you very much for everything, from one random person that likes colorful ponies to another, I want to say from the bottom of my heart that I have become better because of you.

I hope I can keep your interest in any stories even if they may come out shotty, I try my best to have interesting concepts for readers and you keep my investment going.

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No problem dude, I try to follow fics I like as best as I can, but I get so busy with other stuff these days it's hard to follow.

How's the next chapter of this story come along I really like the premises you have so many what's the main character can go from here Im excited to see how you go with this and I wish you the best of luck writing