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Overlord Pony


𝑚𝑦 ℎ𝑜𝑟𝑠𝑒𝑠 ℎ𝑎𝑣𝑒 𝑏𝑖𝑔 ℎ𝑎𝑖𝑟

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Everypony strives for perfection, and the current de-Lis matriarch has it in abundance.

As an aristocrat, Fleur has everything anypony would ever want: money, stability and a wonderful family. Outside of basic court duties and mandatory meetings with other members of the nobility, her life is incredibly easy when viewed from the eyes of an outsider. Yet, as the time to renew her marriage vows draws closer, Fleur begins to feel existential disdain. A sense of dread fills her soul, and a melancholy settles over her-- not that anypony would know; after all, a vow-renewal is quite a stressful thing to plan.

She has never loved her husband, that much has always been clear. They both know why. At least they're friendly to each other. They have a child. Vows should be simple.

When Rarity comes to visit to help Fleur tailor her wedding dress, things come to a head as she realizes where her turmoil really lies.


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cover art by me

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 10 )

Really nice and worth reading. 10/10.

That was a good story goodluck with the rest of it.

Huh. That was an unexpected guest star.

If your marriage needs a vow renewal ceremony, it likely is going to die no matter what. if two people truly love each other, you wouldn't need reaffirmation.

Why this story so underrated?

I feel sorry for all 3 of them here. They are all victims of outdated traditions.

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Enjoying the story so far, I hope to see it continue.

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