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The Elements of Harmony didn't completely destroy Nightmare Moon, they banished her yet again. This time however, she was not sent to the moon... but another world entirely. Now Nightmare Moon must survive the frozen world of Frostpunk. Will she receive help from the locals? Will she receive help in return? Or will the frost consume them regardless?

And is this the last that Equestria will see of the Nightmare?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 12 )

I really like this! Cant wait for more updates, I've always been a fan of nation building work and seeing it combined with Nightmare Moon is a 10/10 in my book.

This is good. The present tense is a little weird, but this looks like it will be fun. Keep it up!

We’ve also managed to scavenge the blueprints for steam cores as well as the Tesla field tech from Tesla city and are going to implement it… once we fix the whole electrocuting people issue. Thanks to being able to make our own steam cores, I’ve transferred essentially all of the city's industry over to the Automatons. No need to waste precious human lives in the mines when I can get our steampunk robots to do it for us. Thanks to that, I’ve had schools built for both our children and adults. We’ve got nearly 90% of the population with 18th century higher education, so research is progressing at a blazing pace.

And the robots will probably go rouge and attack the citizens within the dome

I figured out what went so badly there as well. He banished the chief engineer for his Tesla Field, a rather rough and tumble lady named Marie, when she spoke out against his rule. According to Marie, he publicly appointed someone incompetent as her replacement to spite her. Joke's on him though, Marie managed to bring both the blueprints for the field and steam cores with her when she was exiled - an unbelievable boon for Cinder. With her and other Tesla city surviver’s help - we managed to get working prosthetics for our population as well. With mass Automaton production, human lives have been removed from potentially lethal avenues of work. Life in the Frostlands is as good as it’s ever been - nearly on the level as normal life before the onset of the Great Winter. And my people are determined to make sure things stay that way. I’m broken from my thoughts as the lift reaches the top of the crater.

Is this possible within the game?

So it's a double isekai? Overall it's a good chapter besides the spelling errors

Definently looking forward to more updates liked and followed!!!!!

I like the idea of this story, wishing more comes out. I’ve been a frostpunk fanatic for a year and I’m really excited to see this continue

Recently got into Frostpunk through a remaster of The Studendium's song Shelter From The Storm. Since then, I have watched a few playthroughs, including Markiplier's disastrous "chat-makes-decisions" video, and have absolutely fallen in love with it. I'm a sucker for bleak settings and people pushing through adversity, so this game is brilliant. And having recently read The City Must Survive, I am currently on a Frostpunk binge.

As for this....

While I roll my eyes at the Isekai aspect of this story, specifically with the "gamer-in-the-game" trope, it's honestly perfectly fine. You're adapting a game into fan fiction, so minor tweaks are to be expected. I even don't mind the fact that you're able to create steam cores here. This is very clearly a late-game city, and it wouldn't make sense for the city to still be struggling, especially under the leadership of a seasoned former gamer. It's not clear yet what Purpose was chosen for the city though I suppose that will be revealed in later chapters. In any case, it seems Nightmare is going to have a good place to recover and gain her footing.

I just hope this isn't dead. It looks like it hasn't updated in a year.

It's a good idea. But Isekai with a man and gaming stuff seemed superfluous to me.
Is it worth counting on the continuation? It is sad that there have been no updates for a long time.

There is something similar? Preferably also with Nightmare Moon.

At first I thought, it would be bad, but no it is good.

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