All I Need Is Family

by James 4020

All I Have Is Family

As the blast hits screwball in the back "daddy help", screwball whispers as she hits the ground,

Cozy glow holds screwball in her hooves crying "mom no please be okay", when discord and family arrive fluttershy tends to her daughter while discord and zany go to battle cosmos and venma but it looks like mothball is about to lose his battle and cozy glow watches as the family she tried to avoid is risking their lives for her.

Cozy glow charges to her father's side just as the shadow dragon knocked mothball out of dragon form, "cozy glow stay back!!", Fluttershy shouts after cozy glow who isn't listening.

"C'mon bug eyes you can do it", zany taunts as he dodges venma's attacks

while discord and cosmos are blasting chaos beams at each other "Why must you always try to ruin my family cosmos ?",
Discord asked irritated.

"Discord darling your the one making it so easy for them to destroy", Cosmos said maniacally

Cozy glow flys away leading the dragon away from her family and it worked but that wasn't her only plan, she than dashed up snatching the bell from the shadow dragon and putting it around her own neck.

"Hey shadow breathe stay away from my family", cozy glow shouted while shooting a beam from her newly formed horn destroying the shadow dragon.

As discord and zany dodged out of the way of the beam from cozy glow's horn which turned their enemies to stone, they watched as cozy glow became tired and exhausted and then she passed out.

A few months after cozy glow saved her family, all of equestria attended to watch her get a medal and congratulate her but she never showed up.

Because after putting the bell back the draconequus family decided to take a rest and go on a picnic.

For cozy glow had finally found what she was looking for all this time......a family

The End

Author's Note:

This only the end of the first book not the series stay tuned for more

Comments

[Estee]

So at some point prior to this story, Flurry lost her parents and as opposed to, say, being taken in by Celestia and Luna, she was placed in a perfectly standard orphanage. One where the residents (and quite possibly the staff) happen to recognize Cozy Glow, but nopony's willing to, y'know, tell Canterlot that one of the most dangerous criminals in recent history has claimed a bed. Having the kids bully her? That's fine. Alerting law enforcement? Nah.

And the readership is supposed to simply accept this.

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[asdtroi8895]

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Actually, I think Flurry may have just been visiting the orphanage for whatever reason, at least based on how Shining appears in a later chapter.

[Estee]

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Which just begs more questions. How old is Flurry? In school? Has she taken one Recent History class? Is her family regularly commuting around the planet to let orphanage kids have The Alicorn Experience? Princess Of The Play Date? Did Shining ever pick her up at the orphanage, see who she was playing with, and somehow not recognize Cozy --

-- actually, we all know Shining is a moron, so I'll let that one pass. However, the fact remains that in Chapter One, there's a statue missing, the palace knows a dangerous prisoner is loose, and the sum total of what's being done about this, for enough of a period to be described as 'time went on' while friendships form? Nada.

I'm out.

[James 4020]

Ok I'm here ask your questions

[James 4020]

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Screwball free'd cozy glow in secret and before you ask she pretended to not recognize cozy glow

[James 4020]

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The palace didn't notice because screwball used chaos magic to hide it and the palace trust screwball and doesn't know she was there

[James 4020]

If you want a story to fill in everything then I'll make one shots just ask

[James 4020]

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You are correct she was visiting

[James 4020]

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She hid from most creatures that would report her

[James 4020]

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Hey I'm the author to answer your question flurry heart would runaway from her constant guards since shining and cadance wouldn't even let her see her aunt without them and she saw an orphanage and liked playing with the kids there because it was boring for her at the crystal empire and in equestria

[Wild Stallion]

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However, the fact remains that in Chapter One, there's a statue missing, the palace knows a dangerous prisoner is loose, and the sum total of what's being done about this, for enough of a period to be described as 'time went on' while friendships form? Nada.

Except that's literally what happened with Trixie (Magic Duel), Starlight Glimmer (The Cutie Map), and Chrysalis (Where And Back Again). Dumb? Yes. True to the show? Absolutely.