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Celestial Heavens
Let us write some stories!!! What's your flavor?
Celestial Heavens
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I'll give it a whirl.
Monk
Interesting...but short...too short. Nothing wrong with it, the writing, or the idea but it seems like it’s an excerpt of a larger story. Like I just read a few paragraphs of a story and am just left hanging not knowing what to really think or how to judge it. Gave it a like though.
Not a bad Mini slice of life.
Fun ending.
The Monk
Are you sure you need help improving? It seems that cover art is scary enough. I'm not saying it's bad. I'm saying the picture literally scared the crap out of me when I saw it. So I had to add to my bookshelf so I can read it when I get a chance to. As Pinkie Pie would say, "Sometimes it's fun to be scared!"
I wonder what horrors await me in the story? This looks like it's going to be good. I'll try to read it as soon as I possibly can.
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Yea and I apologize for how short it was. As stated,this is my first horror themed story. Plus it was an idea that had been lingering in the back of my head for awhile. Im thinking of making a sequel but im not sure yet. However, i will try to make other stories longer than this one.
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There’s nothing to apologize for. Keep up the good work
Not bad the writing for this was pretty good. I don’t know why people aren’t liking it. Maybe it’s not their cup of tea so to speak? The story isn’t bad. Like I said you got the horror part of it down with just the cover art alone. I did find it creepy how Luna held up her end of the bargain by killing the guy.
I just had to stop and say that freaking cover art is going to give me nightmares for a week.