For all of his life, Atticus Rho was an outcast. Abandoned by his mother, disowned by his father, and ignored by a world that wanted nothing to do with him because he is blind. In the hopes of starting a new life free from the prejudices of Hoofington, he becomes a math teacher in Canterlot, only to discover that nothing had changed except for his paycheck. Everything changes, however, when he meets a famed model and member of the city's elitist upper class. Love blossoms and light finds its way into the stallion's empty heart.
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A/N: My other fanfiction is on hold for now. life has been crazy and I've had little opportunity to work on it with school and my second job. I hope you enjoy this one! Credit to the cover picture goes to Iridescence's creator, Archer Castellus.
Awesome idea! Your sentences seem to be very good and they express your ideas quite fully. I haven't noticed any issues other than a missing comma after "however" in the beginning of the chapter, so all i can say is keep up the good work! Looking forward to seeing chapter 2.
This story is very well written and with a flawless grammar, The premise is interesting by including a character that surpasses his adversities to live a normal life. Thought this chapter is weak in essence, is very promissing story.
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Thanks for the feedback! I was afraid I didn't put enough into this chapter in terms of meaningful content.
i like it but its very sad
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>The fic is sad
>Fic is tagged as sad
True story bro.
You want a review?? WELL HERES MY REVIEW *Mashes the crap out of the like button then favs*
You want advice? Alright, here it is... ... MOAR